|Reviews for Twins|
| dimascio chapter 1 . 9/13
Damn this needs to be continued
| Xelloss33 chapter 2 . 8/30
"Mind your own business" translates into "Ocuppez-vous de vos affaires", or better yet "Non mais de quoi je me mêle !?". The current text means "Spirit of your own corporationwhich made me have a good laugh but not very accurate...
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/17
Please please please please pleaaaaaassseeeeeee finish this fic
I'm on my kneesss this is one of the best I've ever read please finish it.
You're the best death by angels
| Aquajacks chapter 1 . 8/12
I really hope you update this story.
| NouvelleVoix chapter 2 . 6/28
Why in the world would Eve agree to this? Even if she was fervently sure that Bulgaria would win and hyper-competitive with Celine Malfoy, isn't she supposedly in love with Harry? It doesn't make much sense to volunteer him as a slave, especially given that the Potters do not like or trust the Malfoys in the slightest.
| NouvelleVoix chapter 1 . 6/28
"... with love or lust or passion... or desire."
Those last three all mean the same thing...
| zeps9001 chapter 11 . 2/16
This story has too much angst to be porn, and way to much sex to be anything else. You had this cute relationship with harry and his sister, but for reason you had to ruin it Harry becoming a whore.
| zeps9001 chapter 9 . 2/16
This started as a porn movie then moves to angst filled teenage drama. I hoped for something bit more serious.
| Omenglotzer chapter 14 . 2/15
Okay, I have read both the prequel and this stories uncensored version and I am mildly impressed.
I won't sugarcoat things, your are not a master-author.
But your idea as well as it's execution are better than most of the other stories in this genre.
Not everything goes the way Harry wants and the suspense between him and his sister ist actually very refreshing.
Some physical descriptions are off (things that i can't imagine due to prior positioning) but other than that worthy of a sub.
Hope you'll continue,
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/31
The flying kung fu dick move scene made me cry tears of laughter.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/17
PreetiPotter. link on court case resulting from this story and author getting hacked etc:
Shows that their are some true mutters out there and despite tragic pasts it's no reason to target someone just because they triggered bad thoughts in you.
| Ankalagon chapter 14 . 11/29/2016
This story is actually pretty entertaining. Are we ever going to get another update?
| Luna Cross chapter 14 . 11/19/2016
Dude please update soon i feel so heart broken
I keep imagining eve singing burn from Hamilton
| dylanben955 chapter 14 . 10/14/2016
really great chapter man keep up the great work
| heffronma5 chapter 14 . 9/20/2016
This story is great so far, but I think that you have abandoned it.
I by any chance that it is not abandoned please update soon, as I and I am sure lots of others would like to know what happens next.