Reviews for Sight Of The Sun
Callida chapter 16 . 10/5/2014
You know that smile you get after you read something really incredibly soul touching and inspiring? That's the smile I have right now. Thank you for the lovely Eclare feels and for that shout out that totally made my day.
Callida chapter 15 . 10/5/2014
It's amazing to see Eli finally so content after having to go through some really traumatic stuff. Especially liked how you included the CeCe and Eli therapy. It seemed really honest and in character
Callida chapter 14 . 10/5/2014
I can't handle how happy and cute everyone is now. It's so great to see the misfits happy but still acknowledging each other's pain/issues. Excited to keep reading but sad its almost over
Callida chapter 13 . 10/5/2014
Adam's reaction to Eli wanting to date Clare WAS going to be favorite thing BUT then you went and wrote that super adorable date/kissing section. Simply perfect (especially the french cuteness)
Callida chapter 12 . 10/5/2014
This was so so good. It was amazing to see Eli go from rock bottom to a place where I think he's going to be ok. Liked the Katie tie in too!
Callida chapter 11 . 10/5/2014
I don't know why but that last line is especially haunting. Bravo for having Clare realize that even though she cares about Eli she needs to make sure he wants to get better for him.
Callida chapter 10 . 10/5/2014
Next chapter, next chapter, next chapter
Callida chapter 9 . 10/5/2014
Oh man I'm tearing up. This was really well written and I wish I had more to say but I really need to get to the next chapter. Thanks for being amazing!
Callida chapter 8 . 10/5/2014
"She's ok" Gosh you're such a romantic Eli. Very cute Eli and Clare, loved the scrabble and that Eli actually seemed happy for a little bit.
Callida chapter 7 . 10/5/2014
The hand-holding was perfect, too too perfect. Thought everyone's reaction to Eli's cutting were all very realistic too.
Callida chapter 6 . 10/5/2014
Damn. Ok that... that got pretty dark (but you warned us so I'm not surprised) but again I love the way you're presenting the story and the characters. . .
Callida chapter 5 . 10/5/2014
There are so many things I loved about this chapter but I really want to read the next one so I'll go with my top three. 1) WE'RE THE MISFITS 2) How you wrote Eli opening up to Clare, thorough without feeling forced 3) Eli and Clare hug 'nuff said
Callida chapter 4 . 10/5/2014
Poor Eli! This might sound like an odd comment but you write grief really well. Can't wait for more!
Callida chapter 3 . 10/5/2014
Love love love tutor Eli/Clare idea. Especially enjoying how you're portraying Clare too. Oh and how Eli is taking care of his mom. Ideas are great and writing is really clear and in character
Callida chapter 2 . 10/5/2014
I love the way you write Adam, it takes me back to the good ol' misfit days. Excited to see if Eli gets to have a longer conversation with Clare soon!
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