"Blustering egos of men"
These women aren't self-aware at all are they? As they plot to take over the world and pat themselves on the back for being so much smarter than everyone else. Because of course just having a bunch of money automatically means that their hopes and dreams will just happen right? Oh yes, so much more cunning than Voldemort, lol.

I guess you intentionally wrote them that way. Extremely egotistical yet talking about men's egos (incredibly evil men, no less) with zero notice of their own.

I love how casual Bella's evil is. You wrote her like she has zero moral compass and just follows logical paths without regard to right and wrong or basic human decency. Which fits her character perfectly.

Please come back and update this soon.

Please do huffle puff it would be so great and I think it fits Harry’s character greatly, what with the loyalty he already shows.

Plz update soon

Plz update soon

Plz update soon

I really love this and I hope to read more soon!

No Sé Que decir, me gustaría que leer más de esta maravillosa historia, pero puedo entender el sentimiento. En fin, solo puedo desearte lo mejor, y si regresas tendrás mi apoyo. OwOr

Exquisito!
Me Encanto!
Perfecto!

Perfecto!
Encantador

Un Poco Agridulce.
Pero Maravilloso

Maravilloso!
Me Encanto

Maravilloso!
Me Encanto!
Perfecto

Un Final Un Poco Agridulce, Pero Maravilloso A su Manera.