Reviews for Slumber Party
Pearl-Posts chapter 1 . 3/19/2016
You've finally done it. Congratulations. I had a heart attack from laughter and writing this review with my last breath.
TheDancer'sYellowRaincoat chapter 9 . 5/15/2014
Cute and funny chapter, and hell yeah about makoto in the basement ;)
TheDancer'sYellowRaincoat chapter 5 . 5/10/2014
I feel like the italics at the end of each chapter are like morals that the chapter was teaching us XD
Great story though! I can imagine all their sleepovers to be like this :)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
I was gonna move to the next chapter when I saw " Because you are worth it" lol
Dee1001 chapter 16 . 12/1/2013
Woah plot twist. I REALLY expected Mako-chan to be seme
IamMistyxGary chapter 17 . 10/8/2013
Nevermind what I said, this is perfect!
IamMistyxGary chapter 14 . 10/8/2013
NyxLied chapter 17 . 9/29/2013
Good closure! Cannot wait for your next story if Haruka's basement!
JustOneDayMore chapter 16 . 9/26/2013
I respect anyone who can write a good sex scene, so bravo And great idea having them go to a night club. I could only picture them in their outfits they wear in the ending and I couldn't stop giggling.
p.s. Simple and Clean is now stuck in my head. I love that song.
McVitie chapter 17 . 9/26/2013
aaaaaaah! Thank you thank you thank you! What a perfect ending
Rei would call it:
McVitie chapter 16 . 9/25/2013
You're right, it's a very good ending!
It's not graphic either, which is good because graphic sex is a bit gross XD
But thank you! This is a great chapter and this story has been great the whole way through! Thank you thank youuuuu! 3
hitomi65 chapter 17 . 9/25/2013
it look nice chapter
Sad.Whisper chapter 16 . 9/23/2013
And Makoto was the uke... Im so fxcking happy.
NyxLied chapter 16 . 9/23/2013
Yay for the smut! :D it was quite good. It was sweet and their connection was very strong! Oh my and Haru played the seme. That doesn't happen too often. I liked how you would intertwine their love making with Rei and Nagisa situation. That's fine to keep it as aka st chapter, it's a good and open ending. In my mind after the camping trip Rei and Nagisa started dating and Mako and Haru explored more their relationship at every level.
Thank you for writing this story, it was quite the ride!
hitomi65 chapter 16 . 9/23/2013
nice chapter
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