just show the fucking animagus form already. holy fuck its obnoxious how you keep arbitrarily delaying it. i dont even care much about the form itself unless its actually relevant to the plot.

yuck. that wasnt very good at all. not quite bad writing, but...a bit too close.

never a dull moment with ol' voldy, huh? as a side note, we ever gonna find out about harry's animagus transformation? im fairly certain of what it is, but i dont know why the fuck the story keeps dragging its heels on it.

i swear to fuck if harry ends up pulling the same stupid shit at the ministry as in canon imma reach through the screen and strangle the author. unlike canon harry and the literal zero trustworthy adults around him this time around ALL of the adults are trustworthy enough. theres no excuse to run in like a retard with only a few kiddos as backup.

"daphnes further fate"...fuck you. fuck off with the melodramatic bullshit.

stop using rape/attempted rape as a plot device. its bad writing, especially when you do it like a dozen separate times.

i mean that just isnt how patronuses work , but fanfics ARE free to do their own thing. i dont LIKE it, but its...fine.

if ron was under spells or potions we would 100% know by now, there is no fucking way that after this long and so many cases of compulsion fuckery noone would have checked ol' ronald. which means his fuckery is 100% natural...and that scares me.

that speech was pretentious as fuck, but pretty in character for her, i guess

roxanne is...kinda going full retard. her critical thinking skills seem to have vanished. it doesnt help that SO MANY PEOPLE know the full story but just...arnt telling her for some reason.

that was fucking pathetic.

cool lore, but my god i dont give a shit. i here for the "normal" harry potter stuff, thi is too far removed from that.

Why didn't Daphne put a Lancea between his eyes to finish?

So, the panic room was pretty much useless. The idea is that they get a warning from the wards, then they get to the panic room. No one was warned by the wards except Neville, and that was too late. So I am not seeing the point you made for having a panic room. It's part in the story is pretty much moot.

I can’t believe the first quasi-sex scene in this series is between a werewolf and a death eater and not the official shippings. Lmao