Reviews for The Fall of a Prince
Deactivated-Account-Inactive chapter 1 . 11/12/2015
Hi. I'm Katsumi. I am of Japanese heritage and I could not help but notice that you used many Japanese words such as, chichi-ue, niisan, ototou, okaasan, and more. This was a good story. Keep up the good work! Just a note: When spelling help in Romanji, it is spelled t-a-t-s-u-k-e-t-e. I could not help but notice you missed the "t" and I am have O.C.D. (obsessive compulsive disorder) just so you know. Maybe check your Japanese Romanji spelling. No offense meant on purpose. All in all, good story!
EtheralEscencexAllHotNaruGuys chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
Ahhhhh, update plzzzzz! I'm melting into puddles of baby inuyashas. Help meeeeeeee (lol, it'd be pretty weird if we could actually melt) :3
JasonDragonwing chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
I loved it so much! Please continue of if not please consider letting someone else continue it. Great job with the first update! :)
Ale chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
Aw, and judging by the title of this story, I guess Seibunishi will withdraw that trust :(

I wish you would continue this someday. It's really cute so far :)
fallenangel 234567 chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Love It! It was awesome! U shld update it tho!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
then what happen... waaaaa... i want moreeee.. moreeee...
sydnie chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
You really should finish it! Its really good! You seriously are a gifted writer!
TalkingCoconut chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
When are you gonna update the next chapter? It is really good!
Kira chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
This storie is so funny and good:D I hope that there will come more:D

Kira
KatzeIason69 chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
great story i really hope there is more to come sometime soon.
001Kamikakushi chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
another great fic. really, Inuyasha is just cute. And Sesshoumaru has bad luck."Chichiue will have my ears for this"- that made me smile.

I love the little exchange Sesshoumaru and his father had. You made him speak little but full of meanings. you surely have good writing skills.

they're IC despite the great change of background compared to the actual serie, and that, is a great .

You know, you don't make the characters do whatever you want to your own convenience (or ours, readers) like many other fics. (or if you do, it's not obvious)

I was so happy when i saw "to be continued", but my hope was crushed when i realized, there's no chapter2 T_T.

May you think about continuing this if you have a little time? T_T
Kaleidoscope Sky chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
Hm, this is a very interesting idea, why not continue it? It has a lot of potential as a plot, and judging from this first chapter, your writing is advanced enough to really make something of it. I'll add it to my story alerts and hope for an update!

Eagles may soar but weasels will never be sucked into jet engines.

Kokoro _x
Onyxlight chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
Off to a nice start :o)
TurquoisePanda chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
I like this story, I love stories with Sesshoumaru taking after his baby brother!
Northern Star chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
Just wondering but what happens to Inuyasha's tail? You never mention him having one in "The White Dog" even during the swiming part. Yet in this story and in "The Birth of a Son" you allude to one so where did it go and will it come back?
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