oh my, does Inuyasha have a tail? It wasn't mentioned in TWD so I'm confused now
Also this is another wonderful addition to the other Sesshy oneshot. You actually made me feel lots of pity for him despite what he had done to Inuyasha in the past.

Hi. I'm Katsumi. I am of Japanese heritage and I could not help but notice that you used many Japanese words such as, chichi-ue, niisan, ototou, okaasan, and more. This was a good story. Keep up the good work! Just a note: When spelling help in Romanji, it is spelled t-a-t-s-u-k-e-t-e. I could not help but notice you missed the "t" and I am have O.C.D. (obsessive compulsive disorder) just so you know. Maybe check your Japanese Romanji spelling. No offense meant on purpose. All in all, good story!

Ahhhhh, update plzzzzz! I'm melting into puddles of baby inuyashas. Help meeeeeeee (lol, it'd be pretty weird if we could actually melt) :3

I loved it so much! Please continue of if not please consider letting someone else continue it. Great job with the first update! :)

Aw, and judging by the title of this story, I guess Seibunishi will withdraw that trust :(

I wish you would continue this someday. It's really cute so far :)

Love It! It was awesome! U shld update it tho!

then what happen... waaaaa... i want moreeee.. moreeee...

You really should finish it! Its really good! You seriously are a gifted writer!

When are you gonna update the next chapter? It is really good!

This storie is so funny and good:D I hope that there will come more:D

Kira

great story i really hope there is more to come sometime soon.

another great fic. really, Inuyasha is just cute. And Sesshoumaru has bad luck."Chichiue will have my ears for this"- that made me smile.

I love the little exchange Sesshoumaru and his father had. You made him speak little but full of meanings. you surely have good writing skills.

they're IC despite the great change of background compared to the actual serie, and that, is a great .

You know, you don't make the characters do whatever you want to your own convenience (or ours, readers) like many other fics. (or if you do, it's not obvious)

I was so happy when i saw "to be continued", but my hope was crushed when i realized, there's no chapter2 T_T.

May you think about continuing this if you have a little time? T_T

Hm, this is a very interesting idea, why not continue it? It has a lot of potential as a plot, and judging from this first chapter, your writing is advanced enough to really make something of it. I'll add it to my story alerts and hope for an update!

Eagles may soar but weasels will never be sucked into jet engines.

Kokoro _x

Off to a nice start :o)

I like this story, I love stories with Sesshoumaru taking after his baby brother!