|Reviews for The Fall of a Prince|
| ilikebluepineapples chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
please, please update soon? as well as your other story, the white dog...i don't think its finished yet unless that's the ending? you're a fantastic writer, your syntax and word choice is very natural yet very good, and unlike most authors when you write teh "mushy" stuff you don't overdo it or make it unbearable. it's really amazing! by the way, you know how sesshomaru's mother wear's makeup (in the white dog) to hide her aging? well when she's in her youkai form does the makeup stay, or does it transform into "dog" makeup-dirt or something? or does it go away and then wouldn't she prefer being human even though i know looks don't really matter? and by the way, youkai just sounds like "monkey" for some reason to me. i think "monkey!" whenever i hear the word in any of your stories. funny.
| snowy chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
| alaskanwoman25 chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
this is really good
| Warrior of Forest chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
I love this whole series, and this part is one of my favorites. Your Sesshomaru is simply wonderful. The dog society is complex and well thought-out, far beyond most that are on this server. Keep up the good work!
| angel-kamui chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
I'm reading The White Dog and I stopped for a moment to see what other stories you had and found this side story. This first chapter is nicely done, I like it. Please update soon.
| Midnight Promise chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
I feel so sorry for Sesshoumaru, his father, you think, could have some more time with him and not allow Sesshoumaru's mother around. I mean HE IS THE TAIYOUKAI!
Anyway, you better hurry up and update!
Great job, loved it.
| The Syco chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
Oh! I love it! Is there more? You have no idea just how much I love stories where Sess and Inuyasha AREN'T trying to tearing eachother's throats out. I hope you have more up your sleeve. A wunnerful ficcy!
| trallgorda chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
This so rocks!
| des chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
hey person i loved your stoy please contaniue :tear: :pout: hurry and type A.S.A.P
| Pasht chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
Aw! That's so cute! What a wonderful older brother. Why'd he have to turn all evil?
But, I should point out... Inuyasha doesn't have a tail...
| Yoko-Sesshoumaru chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
I LOVE THIS STORY WITH THE BIGGEST PASSION IMAGINABLE! Oh ma God! I love you! E! You need to get the next part out whenever you can! Now I'm speechless...
| froggiesrcool chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
oh! this is wonderful! and so sad, because i just finished reading the white dog, and know what happens. ;.; well, i notice you haven't updated this since 2002, almost 3 years ago, so UPDATE! update the white dog too. u left an evil ciffy! Ja Ne! until then, anthropomorphized weasels! i know, i'm weird, hahaha...
| kumiya chapter 1 . 2/16/2005
wow! That was really good! I'm actually in the middle of reading the White Dog right now, but make sure you update this one too! Good job again! _
| FyodorD chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
You are truly one of the masters of the Inuyasha genre! You always pack a lot of action AND emotional depth into your stories. I really like the insight into Inu & Sesshomaru's past history together. The way that S craves his father's approval and trust is very moving and easy to relate to.
| Tigeress chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
O_O Wow! This one is wonderful and exciting too. I love hearing stories about the relationship between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru. Please continue it!