|Reviews for Fall of a hero, Rise of a legend|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/13
| easysam chapter 49 . 6/6
I sincerely hope you are writing the sequel to this. It was a fucking awesome story to read and the development of the characters was fantastic.
| snailwriter26 chapter 15 . 1/30
So far a good story with a nice au idea. BUT u seriously need to get rid of some of the comma's in ur sentences because they, really, make, reading, this story, difficult, and I end up, getting, a headache, from the, number of, pauses
| Guest chapter 51 . 1/20
I think it's about time you finished the story it's real good it needs a great ending !
| Peabody chapter 51 . 1/19
Do next chapter long with just SMUT between he and mindy
| Peabody chapter 51 . 12/5/2016
In the next chapter I want see an incredible sex scene between two lovers. Deep and long.
| Peabody chapter 51 . 10/9/2016
C'mon dude, listen to me, do a chapter with really chapter sex between two lovers.
| Peabody chapter 50 . 10/9/2016
Listen to me dude, it's the good thing
| Peabody chapter 49 . 10/9/2016
PLEASE, DO A CHAPTER WITH REALLY HARDER SEX BETWEEN TWO LOVERS!
| DonnieDarkoMD1 chapter 49 . 8/9/2016
| bugaboo13 chapter 1 . 7/8/2016
Ok it's cool and off to a really good start so far.
| thejokersbrother chapter 51 . 5/29/2016
This was a good chapter. Short but good. The build up to the final battle is intense. I can't wait to see how it all finally comes down. Justice Forever vs The Order of Carnage.
Good luck with the next chapter.
| DonnieDarkoMD1 chapter 51 . 5/28/2016
Wow.. Very well.. I hope in another story after this.
| audiraser1 chapter 51 . 5/28/2016
oh! dangerous thoughts! those who think about the time after the war, won't live to see it! watch out, JF!
| MMPRFansince93 chapter 51 . 5/28/2016