|Reviews for Cecelia Dorea Potter|
| shadewatcher chapter 1 . 6/1/2016
Bwahahahaaa! OMG that is too freaking Awesome! XD LOVE IT!
| Aliana.Gabriella.Winchester.17 chapter 1 . 10/14/2015
Yes! She's doing it right. Update, I want to know what she is going to dp next.
| axelaya45 chapter 1 . 6/17/2015
This is Good! Please Continue n Update !
| PrincessMoi chapter 1 . 2/13/2015
This is amazing! Please continue it and update soon!
| Corinne Carmichael chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
Are you going to turn this into a story?
| HunterBerserkerWolf chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
Could use a bit of work cleaning it up so that it reads a bit more smoothly. I can easily see this 7k word chapter being 10k if you had added a little more dialogue and a bit more detail.
Even still, very well done. you've peaked my interest and I can't wait to see some more out of you.
| purple sky always chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
Down with Voldemort! Down with Dumbledore!
| knight902001 chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
damn god start. i wonder what hogwarts will be like, will draco get away with anything this year? is harry going to learn about the prophecy sooner? who will help harry shield his mind?
| katiablackwood chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
omg please continue this! Love it!
| akasanta chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
Excellent beginning. Hope for a new chapter soon. :D
| HolyDragoon chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
Hmmm... My only nitpicks so far is that her declaration of being a Potter was accepted at seemingly face value by the Wizengamot. Surely more proof would be required, even if it was just a single question under Veritaserum? Also, she has an ambitious agenda, that's for sure. Hope you articulate it through the time of the story, there's bound to be opposition if he tries to do too much, too fast.
Apart from that, I'll keep an eye on this one. :)
| god of all chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story
| Penny is wise chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
Awesome first chapter. Gotta love Moody always good to keep people on there toes.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
| magitech chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Excellent start and I am intrigued with your changes
I do have a few questions though.
Why didn't Lia bring charges against Dumbledore for all his illegal and abusive actions towards her family, only he could have obliviated her and shipped her off. In any action against Voldemort and the pure blood faction, the first thing that has to be done is to get rid of their biggest ally, "give them yet another chance Dumbledore"
Since she know Sirius I have to assume she knows of the order, so perhaps another job is to clear the Ministry of all Dumbledore butt kissers, make it clear that loyalty to your lawful Government overrides that to a cowardly school teacher with delusions of adequacy.