Reviews for Time Passes
sirensbane chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
I wanted to check out your work, after our discussion earlier. Is that a Brutus reference there, with the unarmed man? If not, still cool. It's interesting that she's tied to the sun; I guess that makes some sense given the flower's source. Cool last line.

One thing I did notice: you wrote "boarders" instead of "borders." "Boarders" are people who live in your house and pay you rent. :D Other than that, great story.
PureSmoulder chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
I'm playing around with this idea as well, writing the story now. The way you wrote this, it's amazing. I hope you don't mind if I take some inspiration from it.
Arya Elric chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
This was truly, hauntingly beautiful. I had never thought of this before, the possibility of her not being able to die, but you brought this to life in such a sad way...thank you. I loved it. You made me cry (it's a good thing, trust me).
IFallLikeLeavesAndSnow chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
Great story, depressing, but I had a similar idea once, though mine wasn't quite so. . . dour, still a great story. I totally had the ending pegged.
Me-Me Rotamundo chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
It's very nice ... very nice, and would have to say painful.
I loved your way of telling what happened. The truth that I liked your fic ...