|Reviews for Star Wars Ep V: Jedi Assassin|
| Jedi Jesi Jiin chapter 41 . 12/30/2014
I have to say I love the pun on Luke from Episode V :P
Also, I LOVE the camaraderie between the men, it's great. and I love this line in particular:
"' You're worse than Han... That's impossible.'"
Great job! I cannot wait to see what Luke experiences in the cave! OOH!
| EmmyBears chapter 41 . 12/28/2014
Oh my god. Sorry I didn't read this earlier my internet crashed and is still on the fritz. This was amazing! FYI I am Emily from FB. I absolutely can not wait for the next chapter. I can even put what I'm feeling into words it was so good. Wow. Haha good job and keep up the good work my friend. Au revoir. (Goodbye in French)
| Mireilles3 chapter 41 . 12/28/2014
Great new update, dear :) So we're headed toward Bespin's confrontation, huh? I'm curious to see how you'll twist this new one given how mature Luke is in this universe :)
Loved his interactions with Noc :) So cute :)
Keep up the great work!
| SometimesWeDream chapter 41 . 12/26/2014
Probably one of your best written chapters ever... I read sometimes but couldn't be bothered to post, because I was skipping around or not satisfied but here you did impress me. I'm a bit lost with the 'marking part' is it a kind of ritual or protection you were talking about, because Luke keeps asking about his friends well-being and he hasn't had news yet, Vader tried to use the Force on Princess Leia but he got blasted and does it mean she has new powers? I mean, you were really vague about the Dark lord findings- maybe intentional from your part- so I was thinking, he might use it again to attract his son, but how will he find out since he's let the rebels go away? I wish you could let Vader use the princess as a bait and develop an interesting relationship from there, she has more potential and maybe in remembering his late wife hmmm I sense a life will be ended soon and that is master Yoda. I just don't know why he can't tell it straight about the errors of the Jedi orders, his own delusion and lately the deceptive attitude of master Kenobi, its not fair that old dwarf must face all the wrath alone. Luke is learning about the Code, what impact will the harsh truth have on him? II don't think Emperor Palpatine would be so considerate if he wanted to destroy him; the duality in being Specter/Skywalker means he's also able to accept failure and redemption easily because he's a cold assassin with a good heart and he always thinks of Leia as a reminder of what matters in his life, his friends and his pets, and that love in a way will help him. I see he's found the cave, what will happen to him now? In most Star Wars fan-fictions here, it's a rite of passage for the future Jedi but I'm not worried for I'm hoping you will be nice to him whatever happens in there If you could put facebook and deviantart links in your profile... Thanks. Happy holidays and I can't wait for 2014 to be over! Hope for a fulfilling 2015 :D
| aridneia chapter 41 . 12/26/2014
He sees you when you're sleeping,
He knows when you're awake,
He knows whether you've been bad or good,
So be good for goodness sake!
Santa is a creepy stalker...
| TortoisetheStoryteller chapter 41 . 12/26/2014
Okaaaay. Biggs and Tank on Dagobah. This is really gonna change things.
Glad to see another chapter. Sorry to hear your life has been nuts.
| LadyCaedus chapter 41 . 12/26/2014
Thanks for the looooong chapter! I'd say it's the best christmas present I got this year...well, next to my Star Wars The Complete Saga Collection
I know I've pointed this out for at least a billion times, but I looove Luke's character here! I'm sure the big confrontation with Vader's gonna be a lot better than in the actual movie considering the 'Assassin Luke's' way more serious and concentrated than the 'movie Luke'...and less whiny All in all, you once again wrote an awesome chapter! Thanks for making my Friday morning
-Lady Caedus :D (your no.1 fan )
| Lereniel chapter 41 . 12/26/2014
*falls on her knees*
I won't ask where have you been... Just, PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN !
This is a REALLY nice Christmas present ! Thank you !
| ILDV chapter 41 . 12/26/2014
[Ok, I try to make a long (a little) review.]
Many thanks for this long chapter, it's a great present.
I really love the meetings Vader/Luke but also Vader/Leia. You write them really well.
I can't wait for the next meeting father and son (with Leia?).
Merry Christmas and happy holidays.
Buon Natale e buone feste.
| wierdsquirrelgirl chapter 41 . 12/26/2014
Sorry I couldn't review the last chapter. Real life has been demanding lately.
Anyway, as always you made an excellent chapter. Luke is really too smart for his own good. Also I think for me Yoda stole the show here. Its always weird yet fascinating to see such an old and wise person rethink their entire viewpoint. Like when he let Luke play instead of making him focus because he knew that inner child was the part he needed to nurture. And that line where Yoda was disturbed when he realized that an assassin made the perfect Jedi apprentice was brilliant.
For some reason at that moment my mind came up with this entire scenario for when Luke found out that his friends were being tortured. It ended with him going to go rescue them but Yoda interfering like normal, but instead of going anyway he listens to Yoda because he get how important this whole thing is. So instead he opts to mercy kill them with Fade's help instead; stop there hearts or something, because he knows how horrible torture is and he would want to be put out of his misery if it came to that. Yoda freaks out and tells him to go rescue them because he doesn't want Luke to go down that road.
It seemed so epic in my mind. Of course it also seemed epic when I thought of Specter and Boba Fett having their final smackdown in the middle of a stadium surrounded by other assassins and bounty hunters all singing 'We Will Rock You'. The things your mind will spit out when left to chew on it's own thoughts.
| FateOfChaos chapter 41 . 12/25/2014
Thank you for the Christmas present! It was wonderful!
| FireShifter chapter 41 . 12/25/2014
Another awesome chapter! But the suspense is torture! I hope Luke will be strong when he learns the devastating truth about his dad. I love the interaction with him and Master Yoda. And thank the force Biggs and Tank are alive. How will Luke handle about his dear friends being tortured?
Keep on writing and update as soon as possible!
Merry Christmas! :-D
| OctoberOpal chapter 41 . 12/25/2014
Dun dun dun, dun dudun dun dudun! Just had to do it! Good chapter! And Merry Christmas.
| Skylanian Writer chapter 40 . 12/14/2014
It's your #1 fan here to judge your writing ruthlessly! (I'm just kidding)
I'm so glad Vader found out! He was really getting on my nerves... But I like how Vader reacted. In a lot of stories, Vader finds out about his son and renounces the dark side immediately. It's really unrealistic. Your way is much better. I wonder what Luke will do when he finds out...*insert thoughtful chin rubbing here* of course you probably already know with your magical author powers.
I really like Luke and Leia together in this situation. They just seem good for each other. I really like Han and Mara though, so it would be nice if you could use your magic author powers to give them a happy ending too!
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. Life has decided to throw a lot of things at me. But never fear! For I shall always come back and read your lovely peice of literature!
| Janet12 chapter 40 . 12/4/2014
I'm dying with curiosity to see if Luke will be able to stop Han from being frozen in Carbonite or not. Keep updating, please!