Reviews for Abscission of Light
wolfhappiness chapter 7 . 2/28/2014
Wow so much happened in this chapter. At times it felt a little rushed. You maybe could of expanded the details over several chapters. Why did the baby die? Why didn't Bella ask Charlie or Quil if Jake was back? Edward showing up was a little random. I'm not sure why he's there. And the sh*t will hit the fan when the rest of the pack finds out that a Cullen is returning. I guess Bella doesn't know that their presence triggers the wolf gene. But Edward does. Kind of selfish of him.

But I'm sure a lot of this will be explained over the coming chapters. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to the next chapter!
pegasus5406 chapter 7 . 2/27/2014
Great update hon, even with Edward trying to get back into her life...So sad about the baby...sigh...I can't wait to read the next update...thanks hon, huggs
chinadoll381282001 chapter 7 . 2/27/2014
I can't believe she went through all that & without Jake there at her side. So where is Jake? Will he appear soon? And why did he leave her like that?
Dottyanne chapter 7 . 2/27/2014
What a beautiful chapter, so sad, but so incredibly well written. Im not an Edward fan, but he was good to Bella in this chapter so I concede for now! I do want to know where the heck Jake is though! Great job x
rasheedah2907 chapter 7 . 2/27/2014
I wish bella would just share what happened with the pack. Its painful but not as much if you have people there for u. I wonder what the hell happened to jake and why he just ran off. Great chp
LJ Summers chapter 6 . 2/27/2014
WHAT?

Loving this story. :)
LJ Summers chapter 5 . 2/27/2014
Ohhh. Really well-written. I was all caught up and hopeful and devastated and everything.
LJ Summers chapter 3 . 2/27/2014
Quil is pretty awesome, here. And I loved being in Bella's head during the kiss.
It's a Jacob Thing chapter 6 . 2/25/2014
Worth the wait! *grins*
Guest chapter 6 . 2/25/2014
I'm glad you updated. Have been waiting for a while. I hope that jake isn't dead! Can't wait for the next uodate
wolfhappiness chapter 6 . 2/24/2014
Looks good!
chinadoll381282001 chapter 6 . 2/24/2014
I'm so confused... where did Jake go? And why wasn't he there when all of that went down?
itsblackandwhite chapter 6 . 2/24/2014
Gone... As in dead gone or ran away gone. Hope to see more soon. Loving it so far.
klaw1192 chapter 5 . 2/17/2014
Please continue this! It's got a great story line so far! :)
Guest chapter 5 . 1/28/2014
Thats so sad :( please update soon i really want to see how things turn out
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