Reviews for Myths of the UnDead
pumpkinking5 chapter 9 . 4/13/2015

So happy that you are back to update the story!

Peeta is trying to get to his family with Gale help. He doesn't understand why he is helping
him, but he is grateful. They have the Hawthrone, now they need to get the Mellarks.

Katniss is waiting for them. She hopes that they make it. Haymitch is waiting as well with Katniss/
Mrs. Everdeen/Prim.

Great job!
Trude chapter 8 . 7/1/2014
great update, thanks for writing
pumpkinking5 chapter 8 . 7/1/2014

WOW! The dead people are running rampant on the people of the Seams. They are running for their lives. Gale and Peeta are able to get the weapons and his family. Now, they are going to get Peeta's family. It is a hard road maneuvering through the town.

It is getting worse and Gale's mother almost got caught. Peeta was able to save her as well as Gale for Peeta when he almost got caught.

I really liked how you show the chaos around the town and how people are reacing to ti.

Great job!
pumpkinking5 chapter 7 . 6/11/2014

Now, the games begin with Districts playing against their will. They are fitting the undead which
is going to be harder to fight. They definitely need weapons to fight against them.

Gale and Peeta are going together to get their weapons and their families before chaos truly starts
and everyone descend to madness and brutality.

Great job!
Trude chapter 7 . 6/11/2014
great update
Momma2Leos chapter 6 . 9/18/2013
I like the way you built the tension. Can't wait for the next chapter.
pumpkinking5 chapter 6 . 9/11/2013

Haymitch announced to Peeta, Gale and the Everdeens there will be no Victory Tour. All of them are suspsicious and why.

Katniss tells Haymitch about the dead alive bodies that Gale and her found in the forest and from the two
people from District 8. Haymitch can't believe it. He heard of the dead myth, but he thought they
were folk tale.

Now, the Capitoal is retaliating against the rebellious Districts. They dropped the dead people similar to District 8. Snow announced for their acts.

OMG! So it begins...

I adored the sublty moments between Peeta and Katniss. Sometimes, love just happens between
people. It shows regardless of who is in the room.

Great job!
pumpkinking5 chapter 5 . 9/5/2013

WOW! Katniss and Gale barely would able to escape! The zombies were on them. How frieighting!

Yet, Gale wanted to know about Peeta. What did he mean to her. However, Katniss didn't really denied
the relationship to Gale. That speaks volumes. She knows in her heart that Peeta is the one for her, but
her head and fears is not having her embrace his love wholeheartedly.

Haymitch was waiting for them at the Everdeen's house. He knows something. They have
to plan quickly. It is a matter of time before the zombies/walking dead come to the Seams.

The scene of the cookies were surreal. Something so normal right before what happened to Gale and Katniss
makes that moment more poignant. Like the calm before the storm.

Great job!

The story is just getting more gripping and suspenseful. Adored the tidbits of romance between
Peeta and Katniss. Gale sees it, but doesn't like it. Peeta and Katniss are oblivious to the outside
world when they are together. It is sweet.

Well, at least, I got to read two chapters back to back! It was a treat!
pumpkinking5 chapter 4 . 9/5/2013

I can't beleive that I miss this chapter!

Gale and Katniss met Bonnie and Twill. They tell them what happened at their District 11. The Capitol or better yet Snow dropped the zombies from the hovercraft into District 11. Bonnie and Twill saw first hand
the carnage and devastation of what the zombies were doing.

Bonnie was bitten. Twill told them what happened to her. She woke up cold and thirsting for flesh.
Poor Twill got bitten by her. Gale and Katniss were shocked and

Now, Katniss and Gale have an idea of what is coming to the their homes. Capitol's zombies, bitten by a
zombie and you can become one, Most of all, the zombies are going to the their homes.

Great job!
Guest chapter 3 . 8/31/2013
Thiw is amqsing! Frightening! And your prose, writing style, and storyline are excellent. Can't wait for update!
Rosheen chapter 3 . 8/31/2013
This is so incredible! fast paced, brilliant plot, hunger games meets walking dead meets one of the best fanfictions I have read! please write another chapter! I couldn't bare to have itend here :)
pumpkinking5 chapter 3 . 8/31/2013

Katniss took Gale to see the corpse she shot yesterday. He doesn't understand it as well. The body
was already dead. Yet, how did it get to District 12. Kantiss is thinking it came from District 11 becasue
of the clothing was similar to Rue and Thresh. Good observation and clue from Katniss.

Now, another walking dead body appears. Katniss shoots it. Gale is baffled. Why another?

Two Peacekeepers appear after they screamed. OMG what happened?

Great job of slowly unfolding the story and the dead bodies appearing gradually.

Can't wait to see why the Peacekeepers appeared or maybe what they were chasing.
SelenaNina chapter 3 . 8/31/2013
Oh my god. You've done it. You've put The Hunger Games and zombies in the same story! You're AWESOME! I love the idea, please update soon and make longer chapters so we can thoroughly enjoy it! Favorited and followed!
pumpkinking5 chapter 2 . 8/30/2013

Katniss knows the body she shot was dead. Now, the question where did it come from or who
put it there. She doesn't know what to believe. Gale and Katniss have a strain relationship which she i
trying to deal with as well.

Now, Haymitch is on her case about the treatment of Peeta. She knows that she hasn't been nice towrd him.
Haymitch wants her to fix it.

How cute was Peeta with Prim and Mrs. Everdeen until he sees Katniss. Peeta got burn. They were
helping him with some salve to put on it.

At least, Katniss is talking to Peeta. He shared that he is having nightmares as well. Wise words Peeta
told her about the Capitol.

Great job! Adored the zombie angle in the story. It is different and adds another dimension to
the HG storyline.
pumpkinking5 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013

Totally liked your storyline. It is intriguing and interesting.

Katniss came back from the games haunted and unsteady. Her nightmares are real. Prim noticed
and can't really help her.

Now, Katniss see someone in the woods and shots her arrow. Yet, the person was already dead and
walking. OMG!

Great job!