|Reviews for Broken Cycle|
| kharmachaos chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
W-weh! But... No! Oh, that was SO GOOD but it ended all too quickly! I wish to know what happens next, to the Spirit of War or the Spirit of Humanity... sobs. So very interesting, wonderfully written. At the end there it's a gradual, perfect literary zoom out, and boy, are those hard to do. Wonderful.
I just wish for more, weh... T.T
| THE MISSING LINK chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
I LOVED THIS STORY! I COULD NOT STOP READING YOU SHOULD MAKE MORE STORYS LIKE THIS
| Lovely girl 10 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Great one-shot! ;)
| ddtrunks77 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
A great plot and beautifully written too. The ending just what it needed to be too. Yes one wishes to know what pappens next but then ...the spell would be brocken no? I loved it. Thank you for a good read.