Reviews for Dream
Ize101 chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
"You're thinking about the dream you craved his intoxicatingly sweet breath, the feeling of his lips against yours, your tongue intertwining, teeth clashing ... the planes of toned muscle taut, supple and pliant, sensitive to your touch ... your ecstatic moans when he entered you at last in a deliciously slow and fulfilling thrust, pleasure emanating from your deepest being ..." orgasm.

your wordings are just amazing. lots of diction.

poetry was nice too. hanamichi's inner struggle

how you portray youhei is the the best w/ the whole

insightful best friend ready to listen to anything part! dang!

OMG the end just BLEW ME OFF! what with sendo and youhei scheming...
ayu chapter 1 . 11/12/2002
wahh...kawaii desu ne...can't believe that akira and youhei are matchmakers...hehehe...keep up the good work coz i'd love to read on how those wo are going to make kenji and toru go out with each other...gtg...bye..
glacier chapter 1 . 11/3/2002
it's cute. _

er... but i'm a bit confused about the youhei and sendoh part. what exactly is their relationship w/ each other?

then again, maybe i'm just slow. hehehe. anyways, keep up the good work.
greenchox chapter 1 . 10/11/2002
elo! i finally reached this place... _

i havent read the whole story... but the introduction... whaaattt? you're a geom fanatic!

jokings... mam orate the best...

.edge.
Ginnie chapter 1 . 9/21/2002
I didn't ac2aly finish d stowee when I clickd d pwettie wittw button{*wink wink*} at d botom of d pge... I ws doing ds revu bit-by-bit...

Okay... somehow I don't rmembr d chibi-hana n d orig draft... And wat's wid d lminiscnt skin? R u purposely trying to annoy me? I get enuf of him every school day (even when he's not around, and it's your fault!), tnx v much! Stop describing him!

**covers ears and sings tonelessly at the top of her lungs**

(imitating Rhygell)

Those eyes, that hair, the ever-luminiscent skin...

THE TEEEEEEEEEEEEETH!

!

Stop with the uke-ish thingy... (oooh...thingy?... !)

{{FSS SPREAD-EAGLED! BY CABATO!}} *gags horribly...*

"You were ... disturbed ... on our Geometry class ..." bae, it's "in"...

"Nandemonai" is putol2... "nan de mo nai"... unless you meant for the baka to say it all in 0.2 seconds...

"The skin luminescent in the moonlight"... Tch. Even w/o lyt, d 'real, breathing' kenken is stl lumnscnt...

oi, its 'luminiscent'... No wonder u got les than 10 in the splng cntest... [gets bonked *literally!*]

5 guys? Let me count... Kaede-kun, Akira-san, Hiroaki-san, Fujima, Mtisui... right?

"I always get alone on nights like this ..." (? wha...? Ndi k gets...)

Waah... didn't you use my favorite "bonk"ing line somewhere? in one of your drafts?...

AKIRA: "...they bonk each other like rabbits, and screw happily ever after!"

KAEDE: [murderous glare] "Akira..."

AKIRA: "Kaede, best friend!"

G LEE: *sweatdrop*

RHYGELL: *even bigger sweatdrop*

Do you intend on making a SenKosh just for your beloved muse? (oh, is that me? No, ges not... probably the other me...)
Mist3 chapter 1 . 9/15/2002
Hi Rhygell

I am glad to have read your piece of work ... ... I just love the thought of Rukawa being with Hanamichi. For a second, I was worried that it would turn out to be Sendoh X Hanamichi.

Five guys with blue eyes? I know about Rukawa, Sendoh & Mitsui. Koshino? Fujima as well? ... O_O ...

Mist
Tina Caps chapter 1 . 9/13/2002
It's so cute. Wow.

Nice. Very nice.