Reviews for Altered Measure
stormy315 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
great will edward remain a player? will bella look for him when she discovers that she is pregnant? looking forward to the next chapter...
banshee69 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
I'm so engulfed by this story, even after just one chapter. I'm excited to see how this plays out. At least he had a few first himself... kissing, fucking a virgin and worrying about getting her off. She's sparked something in him that's for sure. Can't wait for his reaction when he finds out she's pregnant, or will she reappear after the child is born? Hopefully he won't deny it, knowing she was virgin. Can hardly wait for more.
boo1414 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
What was Bella thinking? Great chapter. Looking forward to the next update.
dommie06 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
lanigirl96003 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Looking forward to more
mzcullen58 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Oh no why did she leave? Can't wait to read more
Jenn chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Great 1st Chapter! Can wait to read more on this story.
BoogieJo78 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Loved it! Can't wait for more.
Update again soon please.
trekgeezer chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Uh, oh! That girl was on a mission. Wonder why. Great chapter. You're off to a terrific start! Thanks.
notsurewhattoput chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
love. cant wait for more!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
i hope this is not a story where they reunite a few years later with E's child already born...
angeleyes73 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Wow, I look forward to reading these updates! Do you have a posting schedule yet?
RobstenLover93 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
uh oh! i think i get this story now hence the summary :) Love the chapter! Glad to read smething of yours again :)
skye282 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
I'm not often a WIP reader but for some reason this one's description caught my eye and just wow, I'm already dying for the next chapter :) So I was kind of expecting her to leave but then hoping she didn't and now we find out the condom broke, oh my, wonder how this will play out. I'm looking forward to finding out though. Such a great start :)
guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Wow! Love it! More please!
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