Reviews for Flames on the Holodeck
hester4418 chapter 4 . 11/23/2013
I love the quiet atmosphere you created - the house, the fireplace, and especially the lake and the moonlight. There was nothing rushed about it, and their coming together just felt so natural. It was also nice to see Chakotay gain a new level of understanding for his grandfather. Great story all around!
murphycat chapter 4 . 10/8/2013
This is more believable than staying alone or wildly sneaking around. Beautiful descriptions and house made it so romantic with the water. Lovely tale.
Profitmom chapter 4 . 9/26/2013
I enjoyed that!
Stiffinme chapter 4 . 9/10/2013
Very nicely done. Will there be more?
SusanC chapter 4 . 9/5/2013
Very nicely done! Such a quiet, beautiful moment in the water in the dark.
randysunshine1980 chapter 4 . 8/29/2013
Great story!
Aunt Kathy chapter 4 . 8/29/2013
Very well done, VV. I enjoyed this immensely. :)