Reviews for Tedium Of Time - Just The Two Of Us
kathyjo chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
I am glad you decided to do an alternate ending cuz I agree with you that this late in the story to add Lucius would seem forced. thank you for writing such a great story
worrywart chapter 5 . 10/8/2013
A lovely ending. I enjoyed the way you brought it all together in the end! Well done!
HarryPGinnyW4eva chapter 5 . 10/7/2013
Brava, my dear! That was even more fun the second time around. :-) Good for you! HG4eva
LilyEvansLily chapter 5 . 10/6/2013
I'll miss this. Sebastian snape is such a good name
Mistra Rose chapter 5 . 10/6/2013
That was good girl and I think you tied everything up like you wanted. BTW I found a spelling mistake for you.

Severus then whisked his bride to Prague, among other things he wanted to show her the Clementinum he loved to visit. He knew that it and the other libraries on the continent would appeal to her bibliophile heart, so they spent tem -(ten)- days exploring library, art galleries, museums and hiding in their hotel rooms exploring each other.

Can't wait to read more and more and I will send you what I have after a few.
Cat130 chapter 5 . 10/6/2013
loved the story thank you for writing it
HP-Lette-Fan chapter 5 . 10/6/2013
I think your heart was more in this ending than the other one but both were very good.
bluefirefly5 chapter 5 . 10/6/2013
I loved this alternative ending! I felt it was a better fit for this tale. Congrats! :D
EccentricGhost chapter 5 . 10/6/2013
"Severus took his bride to Prague..." Yet another bunch of plus points from a Czech reader who enjoyed the story ;D
HarryPGinnyW4eva chapter 4 . 10/2/2013
Thank you once again! It was the perfect (almost) ending for the two of them. I am smiling and wishing you pleasant dreams! HG4eva
bluefirefly5 chapter 4 . 10/2/2013
You weren't the only one seeing something wrong with the original ending. It worked well, but I much prefer this one (but then, I'm a bit biased about Snamione). ;p

Anyway, loved the last scene in the bathtub, and the mind tricks.
HarryPGinnyW4eva chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
Except for the end, you didn't have to do much of a rewrite on that one, but I enjoyed it the second time, too. :-) Thanks again! HG4eva
bluefirefly5 chapter 3 . 9/25/2013
Aaw, I loved the changed ending, with Harry rubbing it in to Draco. And I loved the Cybermen reference. ;p
Petite Mule chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
I understand your dilemna and your need to rewrite it. As hot and sexy treesomes are, especialy with dear Lucius, they didn't fit very well with a possessive Severus. in this case, maybe two triades were one too much? First version was hot and enjoyable. Can't wait to read more of the alternative one. Take care. Kisses
HarryPGinnyW4eva chapter 2 . 9/15/2013
Hi there!, I am impressed with your ability to tell your story two ways and love the focus on their love as a couple. I know Lucius will be okay and I like that they will end up happy together. It seems less fantastical (in this crazy magical world) for them, than the other ending. Thank you, HG4eva
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