Reviews for Harry Potter and the Three Rules |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I see exactly what he's doing; Purchasing knives that are considered Hairlooms under the law, forcing Hogwarts to allow them as 'they have no legal purview to seize the property of a Noble House'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story so far. It shows a lot of promise for a young writer. I hope you finish it some day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've really quite enjoyed this story and it's presented characterization of Harry and the way he "Corrupted" Hermione with the way that Halloween proceeded. I would wish that you could continue to work on it, but obviously after 8 years of no updates that will not be happening. Hope everything in your life is going well in that case, I certainly understand losing the desire to write further, I never completed any of the stories I wrote when I was younger, and consider them all pretty terrible by my standards today. |
![]() ![]() ![]() First, let me say that I’ve been really enjoying this story. It was great - until this chapter. The over-the-top out-of-character McGonagall bashing was really just a complete interest killer. I think there’s a ton of potential with this story; this Harry is really interesting to read about, and I was really looking forward to seeing what other subtle influences he’d have on the story. If you’re still writing I’d encourage you to continue, but STRONGLY recommend a rework of this plot point. It detracts from the rest of your fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this. Wish there was more hey. A pretty cool read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was way too short for how much potential it has, but well, I guess your lost the motivation or the time to write, which is understandable. Sad, but understandable. Thanks though for writing and sharing these few chapters, they made for an interesting reading time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found this story. Wish it had been continued |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoying the story thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() "re-enter" in "you can re-enter" needed a hyphen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry giving Dean that butterfly knife and trainer was a canny move. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Crap! Harry has to get his knives, all of them, back. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! at Harry getting in at least a bit of knife throwing practice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the way Harry dealt with Draco bullying Hermione. AW! at the thought of Remus having sent Harry a wedding pic of his parents for his fifth birthday. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry, Harry, that you couldn't shop for daggers, books or trunks the way you wanted in the company of Hagrid. At least you could buy that dark grey robe. I love it that Strong's is going to retool Harry's existing trunk for him. Yay! at Harry and Hermione meeting in Flourish and Blotts and shopping for books together. I covet Hermione's Bottomless Bqckpack something horrid. Yay! at all of the shopping Harry did after lunch. AW! at the portrait of Harry's grandparents guarding the secret compartment of his trunk. |