|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Three Rules|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3h ago
Hmm... a sociable harry?
| Harmonic Bunny chapter 10 . 4h ago
This was amazing! :)
...though I am keeping an eye out for whether or not you drop this...:(
Otherwise: Really good!
| HeartsGlow chapter 4 . 9h ago
Why would someone send a little boys pic wearing round glasses? Harry didn't get glasses until he started primary school. No one on the WW would know that.
| Harriverse chapter 10 . 10h ago
Oh, no! I ran out of story.
Smart Harry, but not mean or manipulative. I'm not surprised you can write apps. Your chapters have a point, you go right to it with a nice balance of conversation and exposition, and THEY END WAY TOO SOON.
I really don't see Hermione letting her parents be put to sleep, unless you meant that Harry would play sick so he could go alone. I'm hoping that Harry meant he would go to Gringott's to see what might already be in his vaults or had been given as gifts that might fit into the rules. Then again, I was surprised that he didn't go to McGonagall to get his knives back since he was leaving school to 'supposedly' visit his family.
I' was glad you didn't have him say he was going home and have anyone check that he actually went to his aunt's house. Then again, if Dumbledore has him tracked in your fic, as he is in many others, that would mean a scene where someone from school does come to check on him.
| Harriverse chapter 9 . 10h ago
You have a fine understanding of characters and drama. I've tried reading some stories that felt like I was wading through molasses, but yours seems to just fly by. I'm thinking that you mentioned that bit about the professors loosing Hermione's enthusiasm and hoping that she's not 'dumbing down' herself just to blend in. If anything, I'm hoping that her focus is just turned to helping Harry more.
And I've noticed that Harry seems to be spending less time with Ron. He never tried to get Ron's help with the troll either. So Hermione has not only found a way to bond tighter with Harry, they are becoming an impressive team.
| DarkPirateKing69 chapter 10 . 10h ago
i very rarely read any fics with with less than 4000-5000 words/ chapter, but this piqued my interest after reading the first chapter and i'm happy to have continued reading this.
see you in the next chapter.
| DarkPirateKing69 chapter 8 . 11h ago
definitely liking your Hermione.. so many authors are content to just leave her canon personality as it is or grossly exaggerating her character flaws. my favorite HP fanon girl is definitely Daphne, followed y Fleur and Tonks.. bu i have nothing against well nurtured Hermione either. it mostly comes down to how early her character has been changed. too late (5th year) and it feels forced.
| DarkPirateKing69 chapter 7 . 11h ago
that was pretty awesome :D i'm always up for reading new scenes for the troll incident.
| DarkPirateKing69 chapter 5 . 11h ago
i've never enjoyed a Hufflepuf!Harry story.. it always comes out forced, or it's tediously slow paced when Harry is trying to change what people think about them, after being called 'duffers' for god knows how long. it's like trying to get people agree that Bush was an excellent president.. which he definitely was not.
| scorpioneldar chapter 10 . 12h ago
you have a good story here and i would like to see more of it very well done
hope to see more someday
| Harriverse chapter 3 . 21h ago
Giving Harry a portrait of family members to guard his safe was an absolutely brilliant idea!
| GroveWolf chapter 10 . 3/14
this is a good story and i have enjoyed reading it, i'm glad you are keeping on top of updates so hopefully the next chapter will be coming along soon.
| serialkeller chapter 10 . 3/14
Really hope that by the end of the year the teachers have lost so much face with the students that they don't care about the house cup anymore or if not this year, then next year. Would love harry to turn the students against the adults subtly. Other than that, love that hermione is all about being on harry's side and not authority's. Hope that they learn of occlumency and legillimency in a book from knockturn alley and really looking forward to him getting the best of all the teachers. Finally wondering what happened to that book about spells the ministry doesn't want you to know, you mentioned it earlier but nothing was said about it since. I assume one of the spells in it stops the trace. Looking forward to more _
| Kassandra Khaos chapter 10 . 3/13
Oh! I loved this chapter :3 I can't wait to see this all come together in the hopefully soon next amazing chapter? I have to know how Harry and Hermione get out on Christmas!
| GreenAlien123 chapter 5 . 3/13
Wow, your sorting was great! Much better than canon.