Reviews for A Heart Arcane
Camila chapter 16 . 8/14
Fuck, I really hate Edward. I started reading the spanish traslate and then ended reading this , and I really really hate him Bella its too much for him she deserves to be happy
Mia chapter 16 . 7/7
Alright, I take my last review back. Excuse me, I was really about to throw shit for you not appreciating 5 yrs of mad loving.

This is insanely well plotted and nicely written.

Keep going! xx
Mia chapter 15 . 7/7
I really loved this until I read the end of this specific chapter.

I loved it because I could relate to everything happening so far. The 5 yrs of bullshit and the on/off sex.

It's maddening -And making her move on within a year after they cut it off isn't realistic. It's been 2 yrs since I've last seen my ex and 3 since we talked to each other. I don't see him as mine anymore, truths to that, but there is never gonna be a time for me to spot him randomly down the street and say 'I'm okay with him not being mine.'

Cause real love doesn't do that.
He wouldn't ever say this about me as well.

Thank you for the story, anyways.
kellneriner chapter 16 . 2/28
Ugh this is so good. The romantic part of me wished theyd got a happier HEA though. But I'm hopeful! Imagination runs wild with this one!
wordhoarder24 chapter 16 . 1/25
this is gorgeous
NeeNee246 chapter 16 . 12/21/2016
Nope! Definitely not! Nope!
Another great story! But definitely not my favorite topic. :/
jk chapter 16 . 9/29/2016
YES? HE CAN CALL? WHY?

HES A FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT! HE HID A FUCKING KID FROM HER!
HE BROKE UP WITH HER AND GOT SOME WHORE PREGNANT! AND THEN HID IT FROM HER!

HELL FUCKING NO, HE CANT FUCKING CALL
jk chapter 13 . 9/29/2016
so he breaks up with her all the time and fucks other women and then he fucking keeps a pregnant woman a fucking secret from her?
WOW this Edwards a fucking piece of shit...does he even realize what hes taken from her? bella loves him and now she will NEVER be able to be the only woman to have his kids...that's a big fucking deal

bella should leave him
Jonesn chapter 16 . 9/3/2016
Man, these two. I'm still pissed lol
Jonesn chapter 15 . 9/3/2016
Well, I'm still pissed as all hell.
Jonesn chapter 14 . 9/3/2016
Yes! Damn that was satisfying
Jonesn chapter 13 . 9/3/2016
You see, I should hate Edward but I hate Rosalie, the whore. WHY
Jonesn chapter 12 . 9/3/2016
This Bella is every girl. WHY DO WE DO IT WHY
Jonesn chapter 7 . 9/3/2016
*sideyes this story*
Jonesn chapter 6 . 9/3/2016
Hott
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