|Reviews for Sword That Pierces The Heavens|
| bob19h chapter 12 . 10/12
your sick aren't you? hopefully it is not the case but if you are then here's hoping you recover from whatever your suffering from. if not then just take life one step at a time and do as naruto does and grin at any enemy till they become your ally.
| Starlight chapter 12 . 10/4
Thank you for updating, I hope real life gets better.
| Dex-Halo Twitches chapter 12 . 10/1
MURAMASA IS THAT YOU?!
| LittleDevilSpawn chapter 12 . 10/1
Hi.. I would just like to say that your story is amazing and I'm loving every chapter.. And it has relieved my boredom of looking for stories to read so thank you :) .. I hope you feel better soon and that when you get back to your story that you will be happy with it.. Don't complete your story just cause people demand it.. Look after yourself first and we will all be patiently waiting for your return to finish this amazing story
| Tomon chapter 12 . 9/29
I'm glad that you are willing to finish your masterpiece. It definitely deserve it.
Still I wish you good luck also with a real life and hope your situation will improve.
Thanks for your story and looking forward to more! :)
| Xion The XIV chapter 12 . 9/18
Huh this seems like a great story only thing I can think of will Ichigo be able to to keep his second hollow release form?
Also will you skip the mod soul mini-arc and the Bount saga? Since those are only there for Ichigo to learn he needs help containing Zangetsu?
| SynBen28 chapter 9 . 9/17
Yeah, despite what you say at the end, I'm still confused on a fair few things. First, was Uryu actually dead and then brought back by Orihime's time reversing abilities, or just seriously injured? Next, Mayuri is nowhere to be seen in this chapter for no apparent reason since he never battled Uryu. Then you have Chad running away from the Execution Hill, leaving Byakuya and Komamura still standing on the hill. Then you have him being chased by someone who isn't adequately described. Then he's suddenly back on the hill fighting Byakuya and Komamura with no explanation as to how that situation happened. I also think there needs to be a physical description of what Ichigo's bankai looks like since you changed things so much that I'm not sure if it is the same as canon. It would also be nice if we got a better physical description of what Tensa Zangetsu's manifestation looks like since it clearly isn't canon. Then the whole thing with the manifestation apparently showing up in his clash with Aizen is also a little confusing. Not sure if you'll read this long post, but thanks for the chapter.
| SynBen28 chapter 8 . 9/17
I get that there are parts being left out or vague for suspense and to set up the end game, but there are still some confusing parts that feel skipped or glossed over. Like how they were able to go directly into the seiretei instead of having to go through Kukaku. Then there was the sudden switch from Ichigo beating Sui-Feng to having some sort of difficult moral dilemma while being healed. But there is no explanation of what that dilemma is.
| Kytrin chapter 12 . 9/12
I just stumbled across this story on tvtropes fanfic recs and I have to say I'm seriously impressed. I am loving the different version of Ichigo and how things are playing out as a result. I especially love the way Ichigo interacts with the various aspects of himself, and how you're slowly tying it all together. I'm also loving the little easter egg hints you're leaving about what to look for next. Don't think I didn't spot that reference to Muramasa there lol!
Anyway, I see in your note that you're having some difficulty IRL (though I hope it's calmed somewhat between chapter post and now), and I'm sorry to hear it. I hope you feel better soon, and we can all enjoy more of your story. :)
| Crookedly abnormal chapter 12 . 9/10
I don't know what's wrong in rl but take care of yourself ok we can wait longer because your busy it's an amazing story just do what you need to and come back when you feel ready ok
| Crimsonshadowj chapter 12 . 9/5
Don't worry about it. take care of yourself first.
| ShuTheDragon chapter 12 . 9/4
| FF-loverHP1 chapter 12 . 8/31
| lara5170 chapter 9 . 8/23
Tosen wasn't mentioned as an appearance other than showing Shuuhei being disappointed in his captain and having a squad to run
| greasy snivellus chapter 11 . 8/23
10k is a good number but it's not a requirement. as for the change in writing style, its not a bad change at all.