|Reviews for The Blonde Girl|
| Wisher81 chapter 5 . 2/3
This story has a great concept, I just think you should slow down a little. I can't keep up with the quickly escalating storyline. I do believe you're onto something here, and it's very interesting. It also may just be me, but I prefer stories that take lots of time to extend the detail, and really have you get to know the character before they fake their death.
Bye, and don't forget to smile!
| dragonlver chapter 5 . 11/30/2013
OMG you have to bring red back soon or I will die
| ImaginationFlying chapter 5 . 11/25/2013
Pleaseee make it longer
| Icefrost12 chapter 5 . 11/16/2013
Really good so far! Interesting plot, different from any others. I really like it. Continue please!
| gokkylegend chapter 5 . 11/13/2013
Wow Black become Yellow bf, thats escalated quickly
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/3/2013
PWEASE update soon!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
Please update soon! I'm curious to see how this is going to play out...
| VioletHeadPhones chapter 2 . 8/31/2013
Nice chappy, maybe a bit longer plz! : )
| gokkylegend chapter 2 . 8/31/2013
Thats better, but i dont get this part 'Yioahgsndjzlabeihbusnd!" Is what everyone was saying sounded like. '
| VioletHeadPhones chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
Interesting, I like the plot! I hope you update! :)
| gokkylegend chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Thank you for accepting my idea and you did an awesome job on making it. But if you could (not forcing you) try to make the next chapter abit longer. No pressure, if you need help ill help you out :)