Reviews for Trouble
MeMeMooMoo chapter 1 . 8h
This is brain dead retard levels of terrible. A toddler is sent to prison? You're an idiot.
LAB1 chapter 19 . 12/1
This story is much more realistic to how an average child would turn out from an abusive home. I guess that is what makes HP so special is his ability to not become a delinquent when he was more likely to have. Great story and I loved reading it!
Grammar Fiend chapter 17 . 11/8
“…he was emancipated and drained…” This is the kind of error you make over and over and over again. Get yourself a beta who knows the English language. Wrong words, misused, misspelled, missing and mistaken words are littered throughout your story. You use the wrong homonym often and don’t seem to even know the difference between lose and loose. You do not know how to use an apostrophe and regularly mistake the plural for the possessive. Could be a good story if you would only learn how to properly use English grammar. Serious editing is required.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18
Blad3st0rm367 chapter 18 . 10/15
Guest chapter 4 . 10/9
snape is a sick demented rapist and murder one way ticket to hell with the rest of riddles army and leader
Greg chapter 19 . 10/3
This didn't make much sense. The one in his head was the last? Who got rid of the ring? Or the diadem? Or the cup? Or the locket in Grimmauld Place? They couldn't have even gone there yet since Sirius just got released.
Greg chapter 13 . 10/3
Oh, puck! Wizengamot, not Wizamgot. Little Whinging, not Whining. I can barely stand to read this your spelling is so ridiculously bad.
Greg chapter 8 . 10/3
The coins are "galleons", not gallons. Will you quit misspelling common words!
Greg chapter 7 . 10/3
You need serious help with your spelling. It's Erised, not ersid. Ersid isn't anything backwards so makes absolutely no sense as a name for a mirror.
perlcat45 chapter 19 . 9/21
Great story!
JimSilver chapter 19 . 8/23
I’d love to know which parents had which kids! And how ok the girls are all sharing Harry?
ak chapter 19 . 8/8
bonne fic!
The8thMarauder chapter 2 . 8/3
Harry somehow knows the philosophers stone having known about the magical world all of a day and then proceeds to reading further about it on wikipedia. So the muggle world knows all about magic in this story?
DefiantDragon chapter 19 . 7/27
Another masterpiece from the girl with far too many ideas!
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