|Reviews for Trouble|
| muffdyvr chapter 3 . 9/4
arson is setting shit on fire
| Corwyn chapter 19 . 8/11
A beautiful story! Thank you for sharing it with us.
| BerryStainsAndSunflowerSeeds chapter 1 . 8/10
I don't think 6 year Olds can go to juvie? it'd make more sense if it's one of those schools for bad behavior. My sister got sent to one as a kid.
| Moonwatcher01 chapter 8 . 7/27
Weird coincidence but I'm actually rewatching Criminal Minds while reading this
| Moonwatcher01 chapter 6 . 7/27
I love how much your changing the story up! Other fanfics I've read have been good but quite repetitive, ya' know? So I'm loving it, i'm going on a new journey reading this. :)
| renextronex chapter 6 . 6/24
"the girls grabbing bows and arrows"
Yeah. A complete novice trying to use a bow and arrows... The very notion is laughable
| renextronex chapter 1 . 6/23
I know this one is old. But as far as I know a 6 year old can't actually be "detained" in a correctional facility in the UK.
| SarabWalia chapter 19 . 6/17
The ending felt too rushed... short and sweet I guess. It was fun tho. Thanks for writing!
| Zasha the Cat chapter 2 . 6/15
Just going to point out that the minimum age of criminal responsibility in the uk is 10 (has been since ‘63 or so) so it’d be illegal to send Harry to juvie at six. Also, he would have to go to court to to be sent to juvie even if he was 10 in your story, wouldn’t he?It took me two seconds to find that out, too, so I’m not sure if you just didn’t do any research (in which case, why? Whyyy) or if you actually did look it up and then elected to ignore it for the sake of the story. I feel like the latter makes more sense because why wouldn’t you do two seconds of research. Anyway, it’s not a big deal or anything, just annoying for me when things don’t make sense is all. Apart from the whole completely unrealistic part, seems like a good story so far. Idk if I’ll read it all, because it irks me more than it should when people don’t do their research (actually, I think I had read some of this a while ago and gave up eventually), but well done, mostly.
| Vactican chapter 1 . 6/14
did uk really sent 6 year old kid in juvie?
if my memory serves me right its american thing
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/20
oh god a plot oc
| TheHaremKing69 chapter 7 . 5/15
Is this Carol based on someone? I'm so curious right now. It would help if there was a reference image or character for her so i could atleast imagine how she looks like. But well, as author said, she will be described later on in the story
| TheHaremKing69 chapter 6 . 5/14
I'm not sure why they could outrun a Cerberus. Even if it's starved, it doesnt make sense. Because a starved predator is more dangerous than normal.
| TheHaremKing69 chapter 4 . 5/14
Whenever i hear the name Winchester, the only thing that comes to my mind is "Supernatural", Sam and Dean Winchester. Hahaha. It would be funny if Carol was related to them although the chances of that being true are minute
| rjcelmore chapter 1 . 5/10
Ah. Harry Potter: Sly Cooper Edition. Can't wait for the lego game.