Reviews for Trouble
Beth1112 chapter 19 . 12/8
I really enjoyed your story
wiebenor chapter 19 . 11/29
Ok... as much as I love this story, there's one thing I can't understand... this Carol Winchester character, has proven upwards of two or three, if not more, times, that she knows EXACTLY what's wrong with Harry, yet, for whatever reason, she doesn't actually say "I can heal you, y'know?" until the very last chapter, no matter how many times she basically says, "I know what's wrong with you"... I guess the thing I don't get really, is WHY the girl didn't just come out and say everything on the first go, or why the girl didn't seek him out more than she did...
noylj chapter 14 . 11/17
Hope Lucy was home at the time. I see no reason for any Malfoy to live.
noylj chapter 9 . 11/17
There are so many better ways to get to Hoggy.
noylj chapter 8 . 11/17
Ginny is a non-character. Making her different doesn't change snyone's feelings about her. Story "you know this means" tries it's best, but I still didn't like her
noylj chapter 5 . 11/17
Mighty skinny troll at 12' tall and 200 lbs. Try 400 lbs, at a minimum.
CrimsonAxe chapter 15 . 9/11
Does this mean that good old Lucy can join the headless hunt? Man is Nearly headless Nick is going to be jealous!
Foolgod chapter 7 . 9/1
that was a bad excuse. surely someone of Dumbledores positions would receive threats CONSTANTLY he's supposed to be the most powerful wizard in the "safest place in the world" there's no way these people who don't like him and have their children in danger would just let that slide. no way.
Foolgod chapter 6 . 9/1
there ain't no way they would have that conversation right in front of the person that they were trying to keep the information from no matter how unconscious they looked
darthkratos24 chapter 1 . 8/23
So in your world of wacky wonderland you send 6 year olds to Juvie... Clearly abused 6 year olds. Being from England I know in the land known as normal a proper cop would just look at the crazy lady calling the police on a child then look into why a 6 year old would seemingly attack he's cousin his friend and his aunt...they'd then hum ahh leave then within a week Vernon shits himself as child services are knocking on his door to do a surprise inspection paying close attention to a cupboard that a kid apparently says he lives in and a cop saw locks on the outside of... Or did you forget that they have locks on the cupboard?
HoneyBear84 chapter 19 . 8/7
Love it
TristianWolf chapter 14 . 7/28
What about the HOUSE ELVES"'''''. DOBBY?! and the others?!
TristianWolf chapter 13 . 7/28
Oh, I forgot this, Harry Potter SHOULD have been this way all along throughout the books and movies.
Don't get me started on GOF debacle.
Guest chapter 13 . 7/28
Attention, Attention the following words will be in capital letters!

Should have happened this way in the first place.
Guest chapter 19 . 3/28
that is a lot of baby potters
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