|Reviews for Play Pretend|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/24
You should totally write a second part to this. I love all your stories and you're such a great author I would love to see more of this story
| Kat1st chapter 1 . 4/28
Loved every word. Your my favorite writer.
| CheekyChamp2015 chapter 1 . 4/21
Whoop there it is
(I don't know why I said this. Ignore me.)
| Person chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
Can you make more of this wonderfulness.:)
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2015
You must make a sequel for this it's so hot and amazing! Please write another one soon!
| kitkat012803 chapter 1 . 8/12/2015
Can somebody pretty please make a story line like what Nico, Hazel, and frank were accusing them of because that would be awesome and I can't because my computer doesn't work very well and I can't really do it on my phone
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
It was fun in some places, but hard to get into because everyone was OOC.
| Wolf154657 chapter 1 . 1/6/2015
I agree with Leo XD the faimly is fucked up 6 ways to Sunday...and it's only Tusday XD poor guys do all your story's threaten to kill me?!
| cristal.blue5 chapter 1 . 1/4/2015
To be honest, this is one of the most sluttish stories I've ever read in my life and I just about totally love it to the last sentence. How did you come up with the water-enema thing? I didn't even know that! Please keep writing these things, I love them!
| NoirxAnge chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
Ooh I just reread this and I feel so naughty for asking this but, would you even consider writing a sequel of horse!Frank fucking Leo and animal!Nico fucking Percy like omg. Not to be demanding or anything! Just curious if it would ever happen :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/1/2014
I totally agree with you, Leo.
| Reon23 chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
Aww it was sweet I just imagine Nico, Frank, Hazel having sex with Percy and Leo. The baby always are cute and it funny Hazel hates Nancy XD. It's funny how Frank and Nico make a bet which one fill first there lover XD.
| Hajjie chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
What Leo said at the ending was the best!
| Jess-love95 chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
Mmh, Kinky ! This was hot and fun ! I love it D Leo is so right when he says the maily will be fucked up XD Il would like to see the potion's effect, what will Percy choose ? Good ending though )
| gypsyprincess94 chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
I am in love with this! :D