Reviews for The Heir
LUNAISHOT chapter 2 . 12/13/2014
Great story are you going to update this anytime soon? I have read some of your other stories and I like your work but I am worried about the fact you have so many diffrent incomplete stories that I am worried that I will really enjoy a story and you will quit working on it
lady kae chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
Please do more with it
Trance20666 chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
great chapter
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so Harry is a Wizard as well as turning into a Vampire?
Trance
luna chapter 2 . 10/18/2014
This is a story i hope you update soon
Vaneesa85 chapter 2 . 10/15/2014
Loving it please continue soon
RoseMaire chapter 2 . 5/4/2014
I want more! As for suggestions, there are so many places you could go with this. Here are just a few:
Light: Harry can use his new powers (what ever they might be) to help rid the world of Riddle.
Dark: Harry can use his new powers (what ever they might be) to help rid the world of Riddle, then use them to take over the world.
Happy ending: After Riddle is defeated, Harry and Hermione are free to become a truly mated pair with lots of heirs and live happy ever after
Sad Ending: Due to a burst of lust from looking ones mate in the eye Harry and Hermione have a fabulous day/night (week?) of noting but endless sex resulting in Hermione becoming pregnant. But because of that "Neither can win while the other survives" prophecy Harry defeats Voldemort but dies in the processes leaving Hermione to not only care for herself and child but learn how to rule a community of people she barely knows until her son/daughter can take over. Then after all the years of being away from her mate, Hermione kills herself so that she can be with Harry in the Hereafter.
If you are muse-less and would like to offer this fic up for adoption I would be VERY interested. You can find me here on FF .net (XAngelofMercyX09)
DragonTamer01 chapter 2 . 4/5/2014
Oh please, please, PLEASE continue this story.

You've left it open for a LOT of following-up and finishing.
Sapphire3210 chapter 2 . 3/17/2014
Is there going to be more?
btvs22 chapter 2 . 3/12/2014
More please
I love this story, I hope that one day you continue, Hermione like harry mate is great.
Animehunter08 chapter 2 . 2/13/2014
Please please continue this story! This cannot be the end!
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 2 . 9/25/2013
I like it! **
emthereble chapter 2 . 9/19/2013
wow love it !
Make war not love. war is fun chapter 2 . 9/12/2013
interesting
Banana Flavored Eskimo chapter 2 . 9/8/2013
I'm confused because the story says: "complete", but it feels unfinished...
shadewatcher chapter 2 . 9/8/2013
Muwahahahahhaaa! Ok didn't see the bit with Sirius and Remus coming. OK i kinda figured that Sirius would be working for the Vamps since Harry had said he could still 'feel' that he was alive. Just didn't count on him being old vamp blood too. Though it makes the whole thing easier for Harry to take being as he's with family. Hmm, wonder how much Harry will come to hate Dumbles since he basically has lied to him from the get-go. About his mom, about his birthday, about his family, about his whole freaking life. Yea, i think he'll end up hating Dumbldork more. I mean really Voldie would never have done what he did if Dumbledore had reacted like he should all those years ago. So really it's all Dumbledore's fault. Can't wait to see that reaction. Eeee heee heee! LOVE it!

Heh, good thing Hermine is a smart witch otherwise there would be problems. Will there be Weasley bashing? Since they helped to plant all the crap in Harry's head about himself and his family, stuff that was lies. There is no way they couldn't have known some of it at least, which means that they were in on Dumbles' plan? Poor Harry at least he has Hermine and his real family now.
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