Reviews for Firebird's Song: Book II of the Firebird Trilogy
Schmittie chapter 1 . 9/29/2024
This is one of the truly original AUs I've read. Same, but so different at the same time. Well done.
themadmartian chapter 36 . 9/24/2024
I love this series, and as before, it goes into my favorites folder.
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odonnellzoo99 chapter 36 . 8/30/2024
Such a great trilogy.
Freddie Rindklip chapter 19 . 7/4/2024
Chapter 19 has too many folks in the plot - by my mind at least.
Freddie Rindklip chapter 6 . 7/4/2024
Where Luna goes chaos happens. Loved chapter 6.
thepuzzlingcentaur chapter 21 . 5/31/2024
"She was powerful enough that she would have survived the assassination attempts, and would eventually have been labelled as a Dark Lady while leading a bloody, decades-long war similar to what is happening in the Americas"

Damn, now I would like to see all the different possible paths. Lily was a complete badass.
thepuzzlingcentaur chapter 3 . 5/30/2024
I am rereading this after a few years and now I begin to recall why I gave up Firebird's Trilogy before finishing it, despite the fact that the alternate world you created is one of my favourites, one of the most unique and interesting ones.
You are an amazing writer, but you wrote some really bizarre conclusions and this is merely one of the first of many major issues I have with Firebird series.
I am still puzzled at the nonsensical and quite edgy choice of ending the Dursleys in such a brutal way. Along with making Petunia being burned alive after watching her loved ones die, because it was always her fate, it was merely delayed before, right? Fuck me, but not even (Firebird's) Petunia deserves this fate.
But it hardly matters what somebody deserves, it matters that it feels edgier than hell.

Now, about Gregoria Goyle.
Before this, in the gym, it was hinted that Gregoria Goyle is not evil, but more misunderstood, but here she mercilessly killing muggles in anger. There is like zero character developer.
I don't remember if she suffered any consequences for this...being on the "right" side or not, she committed several crimes, along with using underage magic.

And lastly, Goyle as the first choice? For everything that was established so far, they would have picked someone else as the first choice, Goyle might have been the second or the last.
But I suspect that you picked her as every teenage boy worst nightmare.
Edginess level: 9 out of 10.
Adenbadens chapter 25 . 5/17/2024
These stories are a wonderful lesson in malicious compliance. Every time the Sabbat demands something of Harry, he follows the word of that they want in such a way that completely snubs the spirit of it!
evan17w chapter 2 . 4/28/2024
You seen to not know what proletariat means.
AvidReader2425 chapter 21 . 3/24/2024
Thank you very much for another excellent chapter
AvidReader2425 chapter 20 . 3/24/2024
Thanks for another great chapter
AvidReader2425 chapter 19 . 3/24/2024
Thank you very much for another excellent chapter.
AvidReader2425 chapter 18 . 3/24/2024
Thanks for another excellent chapter
AvidReader2425 chapter 17 . 3/24/2024
Uh, I guess anything, and everything can be done to the students of Hogwarts without any real retaliation or care. I figured Harry and Luna, and those without connections would be targets specifically, but considering the broad sweeping targets that were made, it doesn’t seem to be much fear of retaliation from any of the other families.
AvidReader2425 chapter 16 . 3/24/2024
Thanks for another excellent and very fun chapter
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