Reviews for Pack Mother
Scathing reviewer chapter 31 . 8/31
This story was quite enjoyable, but the spelling mistakes are atrocious. Stayed/staid and There/They're were probably the mistakes that got on my nerves the most, but there were lots.

I also enjoyed knowing what was going through Leah's mind early in the story but that seemed to stop about 2/3rds the way through, once she had been with all the guys. Nasty villains, that's for sure. :)
Scathing reviewer chapter 20 . 8/31
Glad you called him Harry. So, so glad you didn't call him Booboo.
Princess layah chapter 11 . 8/15
I'm uhlayah, or laylay or princess's layah, I like ur story so far
Jaylaneese chapter 3 . 8/5
I'm jaylaneese. ~jay~luh~neez~.

I rlly luv this story! Plz nevr stop!
Mabaline stefani chapter 2 . 8/5
I'm mabaline stafani, and I love this story
Stylish hero 101 chapter 1 . 8/5
Hmmmm... Perplexing... Maybe its mating season?
missjordyn chapter 31 . 3/22
This was so amazing. The writing was pretty good, any issues were ones I could look past and the story was inventive and hooked me! Great job. It satisfied a lot of things I wanted to see written.
Lina chapter 31 . 2/4
I wish there was more I really did love reading the hole book I cried I laughed I held my breath and I felt sad at the end but I loved it thank u for writing this
cherryblossomszahime chapter 31 . 7/9/2016
This was beautiful!:)
Guest chapter 31 . 6/4/2016
I'm crying! This is do beautiful!
Reece chapter 19 . 7/5/2015
I love how you used the characters actual names as their babies names. That was pretty creative. I love your story too. It's awesome.
Carrie chapter 31 . 11/30/2014
I think it was grate, but did u have to put so many threats in it. It was always one after another.
InnaraLee chapter 31 . 4/28/2014
Wow you madre me cry again. Love it al thank you for such a wonderful story
blackbloodywolf chapter 31 . 4/17/2014
so amazingly good thou I would suggest you label this story as completed
Guest chapter 31 . 12/11/2013
I am so happy I found this fic. Perfect ending.
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