Reviews for First Night
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
soooo cute. i know cassie did the official version of their first time but yours is much better
ILoveSebastionAndClaceForever chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
I Loved it so much!
i liked all the emotion and diologe and it was one of the best lemons that i have read in a long time.
i really liked it!
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# Clace Forever
fearlessshadowhunter chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
you wrote a good lemon
tkmoore chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
Well written.
Janey-Paininator chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
This was really cute and romantic. I love how you wrote it.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
aww cute
hhhh chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
nice. one of the best clace lemons
Fireroc9 chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
It's a solid first effort. If you're going to keep writing and posting, I highly recommend you find a beta. Having that other set of eyes will be really beneficial for basic edits and structure. It's clear you've read a lot because you've got the lingo of romance and smut. Keep writing and keep practicing. Good start!
Diydme chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
This was fantastic for your first fanfic so romantic and cute, hope to see more from you ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
You are an amazing writer you should post more stuff