|Reviews for First Night|
| claceismymc'D chapter 1 . 3/1
Nice lemon that is long enough to be interesting but short enough not to falle asleep while reading it! Great writing style 3 Read you bio btw and if you haven't already read Divergent (Veronica Roth) and Endgame (James Frey)
| Will H. is my bae chapter 1 . 11/5/2016
You should really continue or make it a two shot, like the morning part of the day...
| alisha24 chapter 1 . 10/6/2015
You're a great writer
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
soooo cute. i know cassie did the official version of their first time but yours is much better
| ILoveSebastionAndClaceForever chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
I Loved it so much!
i liked all the emotion and diologe and it was one of the best lemons that i have read in a long time.
i really liked it!
# Clace Forever
| fearlessshadowhunter chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
you wrote a good lemon
| tkmoore chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
| Janey-Paininator chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
This was really cute and romantic. I love how you wrote it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
| hhhh chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
nice. one of the best clace lemons
| Fireroc9 chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
It's a solid first effort. If you're going to keep writing and posting, I highly recommend you find a beta. Having that other set of eyes will be really beneficial for basic edits and structure. It's clear you've read a lot because you've got the lingo of romance and smut. Keep writing and keep practicing. Good start!
| Diydme chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
This was fantastic for your first fanfic so romantic and cute, hope to see more from you ;)
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
You are an amazing writer you should post more stuff