|Reviews for Call for back up|
| 4fireking chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
What was that part with ki attacks? I hope it isn't coy of me to ask, but could you please look at one of my stories and review too, please.
| austin52896 chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Not going to lie... I half expected the assistant manager to be Nathan Drake. That aside, you had a lot of errors where it seems that there are peices of text missing to the point it's hard to read and difficult to understand. I dont know if you are just using sucky software or you where just in a big hurry. Either way, I would suggest fixing this.
| Anon chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
Can you remove the centering... it is really a bad idea formatting anything other than poetry as every line centered.
Also... you mention Ritsuko knew Misato for 20 years, and met her in high school... If true for your story, then do note at least in series Misato was 28 and Ritsuko 30. So I have to ask how far after 3rd impact failure is it or just how old Ritsuko is, because at 30 in series Ritsuko would need to be at least several years older to reach 20 years for meeting Misato in High School.