Reviews for Beast Boy and Raven
AngelSlayer135 chapter 13 . 5/19
Very good, since this is an older story I won't review each chapter but I will post a much longer review here:
The Good
-The relationship between BB and Raven was not rushed, too many stories begin with them already in love with each other and just in denial about it, something that conflicts not only with real life but the show and the comic as well.
-Good use of various villains throughout the story rather than just the same few over and over again.
-I enjoyed Slade's use of technology rather than him just beating them up like the show tends to do.
-The emoticlones were very well done in my opinion not just having their generic personalities but they were expanded to sharing each other's emotions and given other characteristics, such as timid being defensive and being able to manipulate the maze in her battle.
-I also like the idea of Beast Boy being a somewhat darker character, although I think you could have gone more into why he wanted to kill Slade so much beyond, he messed with my girlfriend. -The other Titans were also fairly well portrayed throughout the story. I think you could have given the Raven and BB fight at the beginning a bit of a more drawn out process rather than solving it in just one chapter or so but still it was good.

The Bad

-Normal Spell checking/grammar checking nothing terrible thought just a couple here and there
-I was not a big fan of the BB is now kinda magic plot you sort of threw in there, nothing in the show or comic seems to support it, other than the unusual characteristics you pointed out. It would have been better if you had actually put in why he was magic rather than just having Raven theorize on it.
-Raven's emoticlone rebellion seemed to have a strange ending to me, it was almost as if you hadn't decided on whether to make the reason her respect for them or just the attitude towards Beast Boy as the final cause.
-Other than the minor healing power Beast Boy does not seem to have any real development in the story, it is always hinted that he would get more just never really happened.
-The Trigon incident felt rushed in a bad way, it was over and done with and just forgotten even though it almost destroyed all life again.

Like I said overall I enjoyed it, A few changes I would have made but nothing major.
Bursgrogash chapter 13 . 10/28/2014
Nooo! the end has come!. all right now that's out of the way it was a fun journey good job.
Dixxy chapter 13 . 10/7/2014
Hi Writerzero,

I had read and LOVED your story THE EMOTICLONE WAR, and i was therefore very enthusiastic about this one, which i felt would be great.

Verdict : it IS great ! Really awesome ! I honestly lotta pleasure in following the evolution of a love relationship between the two Titans. I'm definitely no RAEXBB fan (and never will be, sorry to be that frank...), but what interested me in this story is to see how a relationship evolves from relative indifference to actual love. And how an emotionless girl as Rae suddenly has to face her falling in love, her who probably never envisaged that such a thing could happen (courtesy of her half-demon condition, as well as her showing so lil' feelings in her everyday life).

Your writing is incredibly rich and precise, as well as deeply analytic, and fortunately enough, you're one of those authors who pay great attention to both spelling and sentence structure, so the result is just as satisfying in FORM/SHAPE as it is in CONTENT. Therefore, 'twas an intense pleasure to read ya !

The psychological moments were very interesting and had me stuck to my cell screen for more. I really liked how Rae kind of "supervised" the training of BB as regarded shapeshifting and healing, every morning.

I also particularly dug the confrontations Rae-emoticlones, wz Rae having no love interest in BB (while remaining comfy around him), while ALL of her emotions, including Rage, felt something for him and wanted their owner (i.e. Raven) to "get closer to him". A person being in awkward position with her own emotions... how paradoxical is that ? ;)

I liked the sequence when BB felt asleep by Rae, and he woke up only to find her staring and smiling at him, telling him "Morning !" That was sweet. But in a more general manner, yr story was not one of those soppy works which exaggerately emphasizes on cloying stuff called "fluff" : i mean, that kind of mushy work makes me almost nauseous... so thanxxxx for avoiding that !

And if the emotional moments were wonderful, the actions ones were pretty nice too. The one during which BB almost died was terrible. Congrats for crafting such a dreadful chappy ! I liked how BB continued shifting from one shape to another, exploiting his morphing potential and the different animals to use at his own advantage. Very clever indeed !

So, yeah, overall, this is an awesome work, and no surprise i therefore favorite it. With 2 of yr fic's in my fav's basket, i guess i know which stories i'll read next : all of YOURS ! Well, all of your TT ones, more precisely (I know nothing abt KIM POSSIBLE, so...).

Buddy, i really really am grateful to ya for crafting such admirable stuff as TEW and B&R, and i'm just looking forward to the next stories i'll read from ya. I'll make sure to review all of yr stories. :)

Thanxxxx for everything, and take care ! Good luck for yr future stories, and for yr studies ! )

::..:: Léo ::..::
Alec33 chapter 13 . 5/13/2014
Great story! Loved the ending and Slade's punishment
Alec33 chapter 11 . 5/13/2014
Great chapter! Really funny and Cyborg's bet was hilarious!
Alec33 chapter 10 . 5/13/2014
Loved this chapter!
Alec33 chapter 9 . 5/13/2014
Fluffy and fighty!
Alec33 chapter 4 . 5/13/2014
Really like the story. BB's Plan B was hilarious dude
Alec33 chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
Great chapter!
lunar silver chapter 13 . 9/13/2013
very nice ending
Jimmy1201 chapter 13 . 9/12/2013
Very nice story - I have only watched a couple of the TV episodes and I like your version better. To be fair, this story is more than a movie than a 20 minute episode. Think about reviewing your chapters and perhaps lower the rating. Since the default is not to show the M rated stories, I think many people who would enjoy this story aren't seeing it in the default list of stories.
Chakor Reulle chapter 13 . 9/12/2013
I love it
Joe Stoppinghem chapter 13 . 9/12/2013
Clever way to imprison Slade.
He can't do anything and the person would need both spells etc.

At least they tried going on a date to the movies.
This pair are a good balance, I enjoyed their adventure.
Not sure what you plans are, but I hope to see another one sometime.

Thanks for the time and effort you put into this story.
shugokage chapter 13 . 9/12/2013
Wooo! Congrats on the completion and thanks for the amazing story and ending!
Joe Stoppinghem chapter 12 . 9/11/2013
Another enjoyable chapter.

Glad to see another one coming, sad to think it might be the last one.
Will Slade and Raven's ol' man get along in their own world?
Too fun to see who can outlast who.
Unless Slade is bound for another alternate universe.

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