Reviews for Because He Was Alone
Carnival14 chapter 7 . 5/20
Very good story but Sherlock is to occ for my taste.
galwidanatitud chapter 58 . 11/30/2016
this is such a wonderful story. definitely a feel good one. :)
beccamcr chapter 58 . 9/18/2016
I love this story. Are you going to update anymore?
ncis4ever21 chapter 58 . 6/19/2016
I am in love with this story. I'm so glad I found it. I hope you're gonna update more of it. Please do.
Harriverse chapter 58 . 4/13/2016
Yes, Hamish is very lucky Sherlock is able to open his heart. I just read a bunch of your chapters in a group and the best I can tell is that Hamish is approaching 3? The moments of joy and discovery are precious and memorable, but the majority of a childs day is kind of repetitive. They have to practice their fine motor, verbal and cognitive skills thousands of times for them to develop. Hamish is lucky to be bright and to have Sherlock's attention to develop them to their highest possible potential, so he will be quite precocious. Too many children are left alone, in daycare or given electronics to take the place of human interactions so they don't develop the needed skills as well. Real life does not move as fast or stimulate the brain the same way as TV or electronic games. Hamish is showing more people skills, empathy and compassion than they would.

I hate tablet screens. It won't let me edit what i

So having writers block about the general daily grind of the life of a child is kind of expected. You might want to time skip to interesting events as he gets older.
Harriverse chapter 51 . 4/12/2016
This whole vacation is adorable.
Harriverse chapter 46 . 4/12/2016
Thats one way to solve the 'missing John' problem.
Harriverse chapter 44 . 4/12/2016
Yes, that is why we pit TODDLER gates on stairs!

It did fit your story perfectly. I kind od expected it.
Harriverse chapter 41 . 4/12/2016
That was kinda sad. Sherlock rushed to share something nice with John and he wasn't there. What an ending to a great day.
Sassyluv chapter 58 . 4/9/2016
It's the mark of a good story when there can be a large gap between updates and I can still remember what it's about... So well done
Update soon!
Sassyluv xxx
nightmare13 chapter 58 . 4/5/2016
This is once again so very cute!
I knew the little guy would worm his way into Sherlocks heart:)
What also made me smile is that, with John around Sherlock thinks about what his words or actions might do to others, like John is a moral compass. I really like that!
OrionRaiju chapter 4 . 4/4/2016
I cannot begin to describe how adorable this is. Good grammar, good flow, Sherlock is minutely OOC but it's easily ignorable in the wake of the overflowing cuteness.
Doodle0505 chapter 58 . 4/4/2016
This was so nice! Hamish and the puppy are so cute! Thanks fot writing this for us :)
Harriverse chapter 4 . 2/27/2016
I'm reminded that Bennedict Cumberbatch once said he missed one of his life goals-to be a father by the age of 32.
Harriverse chapter 3 . 2/27/2016
Did anyone notice that Hamish's hair has gone from slightly auburn to darker and his blue-green eyes are now described as green?
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