Reviews for Into the pages
Julianne chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
I love this idea but it is a little hard to read as one big paragraph. Try breaking it down into smaller paragraphs and each line of dialogue should be its own little paragraph, unless the same person continues speaking. Some people treat individual thoughts as lines of dialogue but maybe italicize them to make them distinct from the other spoken words of dialogue. Keep on writing the summary sounded great and you've established how Willow is moving apart from the Scoobies. Good beginning.