|Reviews for Lethe|
| CPU-City chapter 16 . 4/23
This story progressively continues to sting more and more as time goes on.
This whole business with Meta Knight just hurts, and the way that Marx and Kirby were talking about him was just...unsettling to me. Marx just being his horrible self and Kirby seeming distant. Wonderful and getting the point across, but ow.
I still can't decide if I love or hate Marx. It's some tragic mix of both. Everybody just needs a slap in the face and Marx needs quadruple that.
Anyhow, it was excellent to see an update. Wonderfully written as usual, and I'm looking forward to the next arrow to the heart that is this adventure.
| MissQuestions-LaAmazingNabo chapter 16 . 4/22
No... don't tell me Marx is going to eat her , is he?! He promised the Kirbster! Heck, Kirby even refused the watermelon in chapter (#?) because Marx was holding his compromise ! *Flips table, rage fits* *foams* Marx I want to sympathize with you, but you're irredeemable ! ! !
Love your narrative style by the way; it's so subtle. Gives the story it's charm.
| Space Dimentio chapter 16 . 4/16
Oh god what plotty plots have they made
This isn't good, so not good
| Neroperonui chapter 16 . 4/16
ooo! I'm so glad you came back to this! This was an very interesting chapter, I wonder what Marx has planned in the next chapter... Also its nice to see Marx in a different outfit, heh.
| Guest chapter 16 . 4/14
Ah I checked this fic on a whim today and was so excited to see that it had updated! Such a good chapter, especially the suspense at the end! Poor Kirby :(
| gummyninjagirl01 chapter 16 . 4/11
Alright, so, love time! That means review in Spanish c:
Something tells me that we're not even halfway to this story. Or maybe we are. But I am prepared for all Armageddon to be unleashed; I got my helmet on, all my pens and paper, my music. My fanfictions *shifts eyes in suspicion*
OKEY TIME FOR A REAL REVIEW I SUPPOSE, ENOUGH GUMMY NINJA BEAR WEIRDNESS DONT YOU TOTALLY AGREE.
The chapter was great as usual! But I think I did notice a bit errors like using the word "the" at unnecessary times. For example, "The Meta Knight". That's all I remember actually. I forget quickly. And the thing about Marx and the shower. He likes showers I think c: aND HE'S SO CONFLICTED ABOUT KIRBY, LOOK AT THE BLOND NERD MESS WITH HIS HEAD OH MY GOD HE LIKES HIM. But Magolor.. I like his loyalty to Marx, how he tries not to notice how Kirby affects his mental state. And his timidity towards Kirby. He's just so scared and I find that funny. I can imagine him cutting his hair with really shaky hands. But I've been stabbed in the heart when Kirbster transformed into Meta Knight. Yeah, I'm impressed and proud for him picking up the Copy Ability so quickly but when he transformed and thought how he can never be MK, that impaled me. But I've been stabbed many times by many objects because of fics. And I mean that figuratively. wOAH I TALK A LOT EVEN IN REVIEWS GOOD DAY TO YOU NOW
| Anon chapter 15 . 3/31
ok, deep breath...
before i go into this, i want to say,the way you write is very interesting, and i really liked Any Wish, and obviously i liked Leech or i wouldn't be here. i also enjoy violence and darker fics and things...obviously
i really, really, REALLY hate Marx, ok? i hate everything about him, i hate this ship, and i hate how Kirby won't fucking leave him or try to create any personal boundaries despite it all
possible reality is unrealistic aside, i HATE it
if Marx killing Fumu and god knows who else before that didn't make him cross the moral event horizon before, killing Meta Knight absolutely crushed it for me
i don't want him and Kirby to stay together. in fact, i really want Marx dead. it's going to take a LOT for them to be together in the end, and for me to not feel massively upset and bitter about it
they're relationship is not cute in the slightest, it's creepy and disturbing as fuck
the fact that they HAD SEX after Marx killed Kirby's mentor/father figure, clearly traumatizing Kirbs more at the time, does not help
the fact that Marx was still at least a somewhat amoral dick and getting worse when he was younger does not help
the fact that no one else seems to have that much of a problem with it when i read the reviews does not help
and, if it wasn't for that last bit, i would have probably kept my mouth shut much longer, if maybe even never saying anything
now, the sad fact, for me, is that it's genuinely an interesting story, to me, aside from that, and, unless something even worse happens that either confirms my fears or creates a worse problem, i'll probably keep reading anyway. as of the moment, i'm still a fan, just an incredibly upset one
and there is a genuine problem when i fear the next update because i don't want to see another ship-y moment that i'm fairly sure we're supposed to take as cute after all this shit beforehand
...so...to end this entire rant/vent on a happier note
keep working hard, i guess? i mean, it feels awkward trying to be encouraging after all that, but...still...?
(and everything else aside, i actually liked this chapter except for the 'there's someone for everyone' bit. i just needed to use a chapter i hadn't reviewed yet...)
| gummyninjagirl01 chapter 15 . 2/13
Wheeeeeeeeeeee this story has a lot of words for 15 chapters *0*
The whole story filled me with suspense and now that I finished with what's written so far, I come up with my own ideas and stuff and all! Of course authors love hearing ideas even though they aren't even what the story is or even relevant and stuff. Like Marx said to Kirby that he hasn't used magic in a while (I think. It's been a while since that part). And I'm just thinking, "did Magolor do something to him? Or did they summon Nova for a second time and she did something?" and also the whole dream thing. Was Marx able to dream even before Magolor and all? Was that why he was upset and emotional in chappie 14?
| Space Dimentio chapter 15 . 12/26/2014
These little odds and ends are so adorable. It's too easy to forget how psychopathic both of these guys can be.
| HI ITS MASKI chapter 14 . 12/11/2014
MAGOLOR YOU'RE A PIECE OF SHIT AND I LOVE YOU
yo... marx... YO MARX IS FUCKED UP, MAGOLOR LIKE. MAGOLOR YOU DID NOT FUCKING HELL MARX HE IS WAY MORE FUCKED UP BECAUSE OF YOU GREAT JOB NERDLORD
anyways plot details, cool, cool beans, SUBTLE SHIPPING HINTS ABOund
PERFECT AS ALWAYS 10/10 100/100 A
ps send me the cut material on skype xoxo
| ArtificialRangerLiuria chapter 14 . 12/8/2014
Wow, amazing chapter as usual. After reading the part where Marx opens up, I just sat back and thought "Wow, Magolor is really screwed up." I wonder why Marx came to feel so close to Magolor. It's because he sees the parallels about how they're both social outcasts, right? Somehow I get the feeling that Magolor is deranged in a much deeper and more sinister way than Marx can claim to be-when compared to Maggie, Marx just looks like a scared child.
Also, of course I'm super interested in any cut/supplemental stuff you have written. After finals are over I'll definitely read it if you decide to post it!
| Space Dimentio chapter 14 . 12/8/2014
Did someone say character development?
You're breaking my heart with this chapter.
| Neroperonui chapter 14 . 12/8/2014
oooOOOOOO THAT BACKSTORY WAS SO GOOD IM YELLING
The Magolor n Marx stuff is always hella great! just hNNNGH LUV IT.
I also loved the way you edited this, it changed canon events in places but it perfectly worked with the story! I also am very curious to hear more about Zero Two!
as always I can't wait for more!
| Space Dimentio chapter 10 . 11/18/2014
| xXSilent DreamerXx chapter 13 . 11/18/2014
Virtually flawless as always.
So that's how they met, eh? Interesting. Oh, btw, it's-a-me, Arcoris Knight. I changed my username. This was pretty unexpected for an update, but it was just so good. I was kinda wondering how MK and Marx would meet, and this answers my question.
I was reading the "Cask of Amontillado" by Edgar Allen Poe the other day, and the guy who got killed (I think his name was Fortunato) reminded me of Marx in this story, especially how he laughed near his death. It was creepy.
Ok, so this is gijinka. If they're humans, I'm starting to wonder what kind of accent Magolor would have, since he's from a different planet and all.
I'll be waiting for the next update! :)