|Reviews for You're Not My Real Dad!|
| AXELSashes chapter 26 . 10/3
kill it! Kill it now!-erm...oh i mean...oh no! Its claudio...and the omake is spider man, i cracked up laughing when roy crawled up the wall! Spidey-colonel to save the day!
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/20
German: Auf Wiedersehen-Goodbye
Japanese: Ja ne-See ya
| Reidluver chapter 31 . 9/6
I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT THIS IS ONE OF THE GREATEST FMA FANFICS I'VE EVER READ AND I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT I HAVE BEEN GUSHING ABOUT THIS AND IT'S SERIOUSLY PERFECT HOW DO YOU DO IT?!
I've neglected sleep and everything else to get this story read and I don't regret a minute of it. I also have already read the sequel because I just couldn't stop but I will eventually go back and review more of the chapters but I just wanted you to know how incredible this is.
| Mikazuki Mitsukai chapter 30 . 8/9
Yeah, I don't understand RoyEd either. I mean, I couldn't see them in a romantic relationship, whether I support gay rights or not. I mean, with Hohenheim being AWOL, Ed was bound to look to Roy as a father figure (whether the boy was willing to admit it or not), as Roy was the only male authority in his life. Maes doesn't count, since (as I recalled in Brotherhood) he only knew Ed and Al when the boys were fifteen and fourteen respectively, and he was not the one responsible for the boys' actions, nor was he the one who had to deal with whatever consequences that surfaced from said actions. I don't know how it was in the 2003 anime since I haven't the time to watch it yet. RoyEd would seem like incest. And pedophilia. Yikes.
BTW, I absolutely LOVE this fic! You made great OCs, you know? Not one of those incredibly annoying Mary Sue and Marty Stu who were so unnervingly perfect, the story revolves around their in actuality insignificant selves. I love Tyrell. He reminds me of my cousin, the dork.
Personally, I think this fic could use a little more fatherly Royed moments (though it's just me being greedy). I love fatherly Royed moments. I live in it. They're so cute. Especially if Riza and Alphonse were involved, which they were here. Ohohohoh!
Oh, and I love that scene in the hospital, where Ed showed up unexpectedly just to show Roy that the doctor had given him a dango. That's just like a little boy enthusiastically showing his dad the lollipop his doctor gave him as a placating gesture. Very childish. SO ADORABLE!
Keep writing! I love your story!
| Elaine Weasley chapter 25 . 8/3
Jack Sparrow from Dead Man's Chest.
| Elaine Weasley chapter 23 . 8/3
Lol. Either Star Wars or Toy Story. Though since Toy Story was made after, Star Wars...
| Elaine Weasley chapter 22 . 8/3
And that one is Thor the Dark Lord. Loki to Thor while they're escapng.
| Elaine Weasley chapter 21 . 8/3
Dory singing in Finding Nemo! :-)
| Elaine Weasley chapter 19 . 8/3
Deadpan...Frozen. I'd be worried if there was someone who didn't get that.
| Elaine Weasley chapter 18 . 8/3
Uh oh...I was not expecting that.
But the quote this time is Percy Jacson. Right? I read the books a lot but only watched the movie once or twice. I'm pretty sure it wasn't in the books...but they're talking about Grover.
| Elaine Weasley chapter 17 . 8/3
I missed the Captain America quote. I did get it, but I was so entrenched in the story I just kept going and forgot. But the Australian movie! I got that reference:-) Red Dog. And now I am off to read more and hope that Roy doesn't get in over his head...
| Elaine Weasley chapter 13 . 8/3
The only thing I can think of for this one is one of the Hunger Games books, but I dunno...Peeta is maybe the boy with the bread? I liked the fluff etc with the metal limbs and the rain. But now I'm worried about Roy again...
| Elaine Weasley chapter 12 . 8/3
I didn't get the last few, but this one was Dumbledore talking about Neville in Harry Potter and the Sorceror's Stone:-)
| Elaine Weasley chapter 8 . 8/3
Tony Stark from the Avengers! :-) Did you know the after credits scene has them actually eating Schwarma in a half destroyed shop? also, I'm loving the angst and hurt comfort with Roy and Ed.
| Elaine Weasley chapter 7 . 8/3
The slug lady from Monster's Inc.!