Word of advise for English speakers: the author is either trolling about the correct pronunciation of a certain philosopher, or confused about the typical pronunciation of a certain vulgarity. The vowel is short in both though!

If you fix dome error why the twins are in the 7 year? It could be better if they in fifth year, so the only error is that Hermione is not head girl, but prefect.
Also head girl has her own dormitory.

Luna is a year behind

Dumbledore died in 6th year and Fred in the next year.

So really better if this happened in 5th or even fourth year and you don’t have to get Umbitch in the mix

I'm sorry but this chapter made me laugh so hard

DAMN
THE EMOTIONS
THE DRAMA
I like your writing, it makes the story really feel alive and like you are there when it happens

Awesome, happy story. A well-written 10/10!

A wonderful story beautifully written. Loved the banter throughout. Well done and thanks for sharing!

That was fun to read. I'm glad you enjoyed writing it as much as I did with reading it.

i know i got here late, but if you read this i want you to know i appreciate you writing this story so much. with no hyperbole, this is one of the best fanfics i've ever read. thank you for sharing your work and creativity.

What a beautiful story! Thank you so much for writing this amazing, sweet and heartwarming story.

This story was soo sweet and a relief from the hardships of life. Everyday we all struggle and stumble our way through all these things, fight against loneliness, despair, hate and anger. This is just a breath of fresh air to my heavy heart. After reading the first couple of chapters I was so captivated that I just couldn't stop. My heart practically melted and I am really overjoyed. And I just want to thank you for such a great read and I want you to know that this really means something to me. You may not get the credit that you deserve but whoever you are, know that by this piece of art you touched a life of a random person and helped make it better. Helped to put a smile on that person's face and made his day.
I hope you are well and that life will bless you and your gift...

Stole that last line from GOT.

Lovely story, interesting and well written…with a lot of possibilities for future use of the ideas presented (specifically the whole ‘affinity’ thing). At times you managed to channel Douglas Adams quite effectively (the bit about the silly little hats in this chapter, for example). Fun stuff. Thanks for posting!

This is a fun story, and I love your writing style…and the little references you pepper throughout. Declan MacManus, eh? As in Elvis Costello’ real name, or someone else?

This story was just really good. It was definitely fluffy but it was also interesting. I really liked how Harry would flirt with her when he was tired and not realize that was what he was doing.
Thank you for sharing your creativity.

Maravilloso