|Reviews for Madara's Student|
| fmlfavedtoomuchsmut chapter 1 . 3/11/2016
Im in the middle of reading this just a few comments:
1. You need someone to proofread this, there are a lot of issues with grammar, sentence structure and typos.
2. I would either avoid trying to be funny or spend a little more time making your "sarcasm"/humor humorous. Also, you dont need to describe the reaction of every character in the Narutoverse to Naruto's shitty joke
Not that far into the story but i look forward to your development as a writer.
| myafroatemydog chapter 18 . 3/8/2016
Such a great chapter. Can't wait to start on the next one.
| Zxynwin chapter 4 . 3/6/2016
I really hate how everyone makes Danzo the 'evil plotting guy that just wants more power' I mean yeah he's a bad guy but it would be so much better to have him as more of a Grey character who only cared for making the leaf strong(as his Canon character is like). Also these chapters so far could use some looking over as there are some spelling and grammar errors
| myafroatemydog chapter 16 . 3/2/2016
| myafroatemydog chapter 12 . 3/1/2016
| myafroatemydog chapter 11 . 3/1/2016
Another excellent fight scene your great at them
| myafroatemydog chapter 10 . 3/1/2016
Another excellent chapter
| myafroatemydog chapter 9 . 3/1/2016
Naruto's moon powers seem pretty cool
| myafroatemydog chapter 8 . 3/1/2016
I was hoping you would killed off kiba not shino
| myafroatemydog chapter 7 . 2/29/2016
This fic is getting better
| myafroatemydog chapter 6 . 2/29/2016
I'm wondering where you will take this. I feel like your going to have tsunade as his grandmother
| Achilles97 chapter 23 . 2/29/2016
I was so close to dropping this story but I'm glad your back this is one of my favorite anti-hero Naruto stories.
| myafroatemydog chapter 5 . 2/29/2016
I wonder where you will take this
| myafroatemydog chapter 4 . 2/29/2016
Another great chapter
| myafroatemydog chapter 3 . 2/29/2016
Another excellent chapter.