Reviews for Under Masen's Command
Guest chapter 3 . 8/18/2017
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Gubefan1980 chapter 20 . 11/12/2015
That was so hot and smexy, she knew what she wanted and went after it, thankfully Edward finally gave in to what he knew their bodies wanted. Each other, Dom and sub, good story, held my interest
Gubefan1980 chapter 15 . 11/12/2015
OMg that is so fuck hawt, yummy one for the spank bank, I am seriously perving on BDSM stories. this is sooo good.
Gubefan1980 chapter 14 . 11/12/2015
I suspect Bella thought of that bare pussy thing too, I never got that shit makes me think that the Dom is getting off on fucking a girl instead of a woman. Get over the bush for Pete's sake, smexy chapter
Gubefan1980 chapter 13 . 11/12/2015
Wow that was really thought out. I hope the hell Edward doesn't head for the hills yet again, very good chapters, I am totally pervy devoted to BDSM but only with certain characters, B & E E & J and two men from a TV program, Criminal Minds
sury.h chapter 20 . 11/1/2015
it's simply me n you chapter 20 . 10/14/2015
Well, she definitely got what she wanted. :-)
jk chapter 7 . 6/2/2015
are you kidding me? he said he couldn't with you bella so what do you do? you work your ass off for years and go into the military just so Edward can be your commander or whatever? hes ditched your ass twice for fucks sake your soooo goddamn pathetic! just move the fuck on and find another dom...Edward can go fuck himself
jk chapter 5 . 6/2/2015
why is she passing him notes? he broke her heart so he could fuck alice of all freaking people...I don't care if hs gonna use the excuse that they looked alike..which I can just feel coming...that makes it worse
why don't you just give bella someone that looks like Edward...just hotter
Edward is obviously a whore and a piece of shit
divyvicki chapter 20 . 12/20/2014
I don't usually like this type of story, but found myself enjoying this one. Good job.
divyvicki chapter 18 . 12/15/2014
Very well written. Can wait to read more.
divyvicki chapter 16 . 12/10/2014
Great chapter.
divyvicki chapter 14 . 12/5/2014
She sure knows how to get under his skin. LOL.
divyvicki chapter 13 . 11/30/2014
Hmm, wonder how Edward is going to respond to this turn of events.
divyvicki chapter 12 . 11/23/2014
She is determined.
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