Reviews for Cinders
brookienicolexx chapter 21 . 6/6
Oh my lordy :D this is getting intense, very intense. Even though this is only a story I'm actually beginning to worry for the characters XD
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 16 . 6/5
XD; Oh dear...not sure what I think of Bulma pretty much taking advantage of Vegeta when gems drunk! Strange twist!
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 8 . 6/5
I'm surprised but like it, too!
LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta chapter 21 . 6/5
I wonder what Frieza is gonna do to Vegeta? Who else is he gonna try to hurt? Will Bardock help them? Update again soon
brookienicolexx chapter 20 . 5/31
Oh lordy, the story just gets better and better! I love your writing and plot lines, keeps up the anticipation :D
LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta chapter 20 . 5/25
Damn I wonder if Frieza and Zarbon are gonna do something to hurt Bulma or anyone close to her? Is Frieza deaf and dumb? Bulma has made it public that she is shutting down the armory department of Capsule Corp. She should've told him that she wasn't even gonna finish the last project. Will she tell Vegeta about her meeting? Update again soon
elianni chapter 20 . 5/25
Yup that's frezza trying to take everything i hope bulma can handle it so let's c what frezza has to offer bulma and i know it's not good well glad ur back and stonger than ever till next chapter and thank u
ficklesticks chapter 1 . 4/5
blaze it
Daughter Of Vegeta chapter 19 . 3/30
D'awww! This was adorable!...Until Frieza came into the picture. You, my dear, are beginning to concern me. xD
LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta chapter 19 . 3/30
I wonder if Frieza had anything to do with the fire that cost her parents their lives? I bet he did. Zarbon, you're an a$$ for saying that comment about her family. Glad that everything is going good with Vegeta and her. Update again soon and good luck on your exams.
elianni chapter 19 . 3/30
I'm glad u put up a new chapter i really didn't think ftezza and zarbon would b in this but now we get into action i bet well thank u and good to c u still writing till next update
nancy103 chapter 19 . 3/30
You brought in Freiza and company! Now it may get really dirty. Hmm, will the fire be explained?
Beauty Eclipsed chapter 18 . 1/1
Love the plot!
blackirishawk chapter 18 . 12/21/2014
I can't believe I'm just finding you're story now! It's amazing even though I was a bit skeptical of vegeta's character it fell into place as the story went on! I love it!
Daughter Of Vegeta chapter 18 . 12/20/2014
Aww! How cute. :)

Really enjoyed the way you demonstrated and explained Vegeta's struggles/emotions in this chapter!
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