|Reviews for Sunlight for Leaves|
| Arai kaji chapter 9 . 1/23
This story is fucking nuts! I love it!
| skepsis66 chapter 9 . 1/11
Lol. Absurd and epic and hilariously fun!
| voidblade6 chapter 7 . 12/26/2013
You know I just realized a bit ago that you made sarutobi a dick and naruto significantly more realistic. I mean jesus uzumaki is cool and all but totally stays mostly true to narutos character but makes it so readers can understand him.
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/3/2013
this is 1 of tha best naruto fan fictions. so please DON'T stop writing it
| A non mouse chapter 9 . 12/2/2013
This is a rather good story.
In fact I think it is one of the better chunin exam arcs I've read; if only for the fact that is has originality. Going with non-cannon match ups, and actually having something decent for the background characters fights is something of a rarity. Also the fight between Naruto and Gaara was particularly well done; there were actual tactics and trickery! Things which are far to rare in Naruto fanfic, despite it being about ninja.
I am looking forward to the continuation of this story.
| curve-goddess chapter 9 . 11/23/2013
I'm so addicted to this story! I can't wait for you to write more
| frytrix chapter 9 . 10/24/2013
Odd story, i am getting curious about NeXT Chapter.
| fantasymaniac17 chapter 9 . 10/21/2013
Hi Hi! This is really cool! I like how you're developing Naruto's emotions and reactions to people and their choices. It always kinda bugged me that he never seemed to get truly mad a Kakashi and Jiraiya. It's really good to see him act like he has a full range of emotions :) Thank you for the story and sharing it and I hope you update it soon!
| roshane chapter 4 . 10/18/2013
If you think about it logicaly water is the hardest element because fire, ligthning and wind can be produced form nothing , for water you need a source aka pond, sea, river so whats he ganna do walk around with a tank on his back? I'm curious to see how you work that one out, and umm narutos natural element is wind if your aligned with an element it should come crazy easy to him than an element that hes not aligned with...the two easiest would have been a combo of wind/fire junkuriki or not theres only so much searing heat garra can take
| roshane chapter 3 . 10/18/2013
A slug?. Eww...so I guess sage mode is out the door now..
| Kain129 chapter 9 . 10/17/2013
more make more soon
| Flying Raijin chapter 5 . 10/14/2013
"I'm just calling it like I see it."
Exactly,but you said it yourself that you're lacking in cannon knowledge. That would explain that you think Kakashi played favourites. Now aside from the pretty logical explanation Kakashi gives you missed the part where Jiraiya tells him to leave Naruto to him and that he should train Sasuke.
Anyway that point done. I like the story, although it'd benefit imo, if you knew more of the cannon stuff, because at this point this story has much stuff that doesn't make sense. It can be evaluated as an AU, which has nothing wrong of course. anyway because I'm a bit of a cannon lover I don't like some parts of your story, but I still think it has good stuff mainly regarding character development and interaction.
| Lydia-Hood chapter 2 . 10/5/2013
... a few things are off, first Naruto was supposed to fight Neji, Sasuke was supposed to fight Gaara and Sakura was supposed to have lost by knocking herself at the same time Ino did... or something ridiculously pathetic of the sort. Also making Sakura gay? After having her defined as a raving mad fangirl of Sasuke? Its weak, sure its a efficient plot device for loosing the attention of Naruto, but also it doesn't make a single drop of sense considering all we know of her, at least have her be a bisexual or something of the sort and for her to have discovered it during the three years off, but not already.
Also Kurenai isn't supposed to be pregnant yet, she gave birth of Asuma's child AFTER the 3 years trip, which mean she is 3 years ahead of time.
| cybercorpsesnake chapter 9 . 10/4/2013
Nice chapter. Good fights but felt like some characters were one shot and maybe some more development of some fights.
Keep up the good work.
| Soul Recovery chapter 9 . 10/3/2013
I'm not a person wanting you to become a doped writer. I'm just someone who can't wait to see where this adventure goes. You take on the verse is fresh to me, as I've read many stories on and off of FF. I encourage you to keep going, but to keep improving. Hope to see an update soon.