Reviews for The Butterfly Effect
kevinkrause.kk49 chapter 11 . 1/18/2018
Love the story but the ending was a bit..What was it all a dream?
MornaStar chapter 1 . 7/9/2017
Very good story. It was super quick and could have been given more depth to it if you had, had a bit more patients to explore the description of what was going on around them, feeling explored with more depth and even thoughts put in there a little more. The ending would have been so much better if it wasn't a dream the whole time. I think people forget how much that ending is actually used. That or a lapse in sanity. sometimes when I got uninterested in a story, I would ask a fellow writer to write a chapter. That could help to bring more interest into your story. Start your gears going. Try exploring your options when you get like that. Even trying a different direction. congrats on a great story and concept! Happy to hear you are going to change the Chapters and endings
Rainbowdea chapter 10 . 4/24/2017
If you want help with french, I'll be glad to help :)
Blackshadow390 chapter 12 . 2/27/2016
It was all a dream... Damn... Anyway, great story.
Anonymous chapter 4 . 10/11/2015
Hey don't worry, I'm a Virgin too, and I know a bunch of shit about something I have never done
B00tyQueen chapter 12 . 8/16/2015
Guest chapter 10 . 7/4/2015
OMG, you're just terrible at french... XD Ça pique les yeux ! But I love "Ma petite fleur"...
Just another amazing (and maybe a little more!) chapter written, thank you very much for your work!
That post arrives really late, I know... '
Bailey chapter 12 . 5/14/2015
This story was awesome, sad, fun, and sweet! Good job on the story!
jazzers444 chapter 12 . 3/18/2015
I'm so glad the endings changing to be happier *sighs of relief*
Tenshoru chapter 12 . 1/21/2015
Tenshoru chapter 11 . 1/21/2015
That was an awesome ending. A great story, that definitely deserves reading.
Tenshoru chapter 10 . 1/21/2015
Man you got me good with the Mikasa thing. Now I hate the Wall cult, and am super happy that Eren crushed a bunch of them when he was fighting Annie. Maybe the miscarriages are being caused by drugs that the wall cult is using on the military people. Guess I'll just have to read more of this awesome story to find out!
Tenshoru chapter 9 . 1/21/2015
Uh oh. Did what I think it was happen? Was Mikasa pregnant?! AGHHHH! MIKASA!

I'm so worried now!
Tenshoru chapter 8 . 1/21/2015
Great chapter, very well written.
Tenshoru chapter 7 . 1/21/2015
Awwwww! So cute! Levi being all fatherly, and awesome. The 'Annie' coincidence was pretty cool too.
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