|Reviews for Revelations|
| Amanda Do'Urden chapter 8 . 3/16
Such a pity you seemed to have abandoned the Trek fic! I was just getting into it.
| Nat chapter 8 . 3/12/2014
BEST STORY EVER MUST UPDATE SOON THXS!
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/6/2014
I'm really enjoying your story.
Kirk/Khan is my fav pairing and there are too few fics with them... It's also nice to read a story with Khan not being cruel and insane. I'm glad Kirk recognises the difficult situation Khan had been in and can sympathize with him.
Loooking foward to the next update. You are a great writer!
| Mirage chapter 8 . 2/27/2014
wow those two are great together, and Bones is the best friend ever
such a nice story and pairing! please many more storys and i hope Khan comes free even bevor the Starfleet...i mean more or less they are the one who did make Khan kill so many people! it was more or less selfdefence and those is ok bevor the law..when you fight for the life of your family or persons who cant deffend themself...maybe he can bring his intelligence in to help them restore the city or citys...not sure, and maybe learn from him...way bether then freeze him in with his family, they can help and later maybe find there own planet and create a new colony-city somewhere...and Jim can after his work life grow old there with Khan or not so old when you think about how old Khan is even bevor the freezing maybe they will be young mthusalems, and when Bones gets some blood too he will have funn nugging at them and other
oh i cant wait to see where your story goes, i love how you write,
i really like that Jim gives him a chance and that he trys to fight for dominace or atleast fights him for fun and foreplay or so
cant wait to read how he will bring Spock on his side...maybe with logic_
please write soon many more chaps
| Cyrise-sevens chapter 7 . 2/2/2014
You describe well the way Jim reacts to Khan ! I really love that story ! Please, write the next one soon ?
| Kiheada.Ray.T chapter 7 . 1/29/2014
This is so adorable! *squees* I had a dream about this pairing last night and decided to hunt down some fanfiction. So far I'm not disappointed! See you next chapter
| Adapse chapter 7 . 1/26/2014
An update! *_*
I'm loving this story so far, it's a workout trying not to smile too widely while reading this in the office. I'm really curious as to how this will play out for everyone...considering both Khan and Kirk have their crew to think about the Starfleet would want to freeze his arse...
I'm keeping my fingers crossed for a happy ending. o uo
Thanks for the lovely update! I hope for more to come soon!
| LightLessStar chapter 6 . 1/24/2014
| Ferowyn chapter 6 . 11/25/2013
This story is just awesome. Please tell me you haven't abandoned it?
Because I love EVERYTHING about it. And now it's just beginnging to get interesting...
| Frostonthetrees chapter 6 . 11/18/2013
PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THINGS GOOD UPDATE!
| Mimz chapter 6 . 11/11/2013
Oh my. Please do carry on with this story.
| vanelia chapter 6 . 10/20/2013
im loving were you are going with this please give us more chapters
| Biku-sensei-sez-meow chapter 6 . 10/13/2013
Sure it is. CUTE! Ah, I love these actors. And the pairing is superb! Please write more, I must know what happens next. Meow!
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/12/2013
Erhmagahd! This is fantastic! So much suspense and tension! i am so exited for your update!
| Somnone chapter 6 . 10/3/2013
The tension is wayyyy too up in the ceiling! Updates!