Reviews for Bonfires at Midnight
JadeSpeedster17 chapter 4 . 6/6
Meh, I'm board so here's something.

"In the pale of moon the fire burns.
Where we make our prays to be heard
We sing, we dance
We hope, we pray
To meet each other again someday.
The hope that things be plentiful, bright.
That we grow in wisdom and courage alike.
Magic and Creatures dance tonight.
Asking to hear the songs of the old
So we may sing, dance, hope, and pray again.
When we meet each other in the pale moonlight."

I get bored easy, and I hum tunes to myself. XD
panther73110 chapter 7 . 5/23
Were you still writing a sequel to this story?
Saissa chapter 7 . 4/17
UM the mention of Snape Contacting Dumbles over Weasley and Granger needs to be looked at - her name is NOt MRS Granger. She can be called MS or MISS Granger but not MRS!
Saissa chapter 4 . 4/17
I think it's pretty clear that Lily performed a Rite of Life on Harry right before Voldemort showed up on Halloween back in 1981. She was also willing to sacrifice her life for his - which is why he survived!
Tyler'sPrincess chapter 7 . 4/16
I can't wait to see year 2 and Harry meeting Sirius! I loved this story.
whitebuffalowmn chapter 7 . 9/30/2016
good story! thank you for writing this novella
Guest chapter 7 . 8/29/2016
so abandoned? what a shame I really enjoyed this and I hope you can find it in your heart to actually update xxx
rowenasheir chapter 7 . 8/18/2016
Astory wher HP faces one horcrux DL wannabe per year would be fun, until the last one is defeated. The cup? or the diadem?
Dogco94 chapter 7 . 7/11/2016
great story hope theres more to come
Renata MM chapter 7 . 7/4/2016
Just to say that I miss this story and still hope that someday you will continue it.
Jakinabox chapter 7 . 6/12/2016
I really enjoyed this, it was nice change of pace from a lot of other fics that usually try to make Harry either the coolest hero, darkest lord or greyist warrior. A lot of RavenclawHarry fics have Harry befriend Hermione or become king of the nerds.

The rites and rituals were done very nicely, though a little more detail and characterization of Daphne would have been swell.

The last chapter felt a little rushed, but it has made me wanting more especially for the summer with Sirius.

Cant wait till next the second year, keep up the good work!
a chapter 5 . 1/10/2016
Sorry if this review is useless, but goddamnit, you really get Dumbledore.
OoOXylionOoO chapter 7 . 1/12/2016
Good work in this fanfiction :D
loki0191 chapter 7 . 1/11/2016
I hope that u post the sequel soon! This is a really nice story, the only issues you have to work on are grammatical errors that came up here and there. Also your dialogue needs to be more realistic. But apart rom that, great stuff!
kazers chapter 7 . 11/8/2015
love it :)
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