|Reviews for Fixing a Monochrome Rainbow|
| Jayelyyn chapter 1 . 3/21
I never understood why everyone made such a big deal out of Percy "breaking a promise" on Nico's behalf. Percy never said "Bianca won't die" or even "I'll keep her safe." Percy was smart, and didn't make a promise he knew he couldn't keep. What he says is, "I'll do my best." And Percy never broke that promise. Nobody can break the will of a teenage girl...so when Bianca wanted to sacrifice herself to save the people around her, Percy couldn't stop her. But he DID try. I'm just saying that it's not fair for Nico (although I understand his grief) to blame Percy for anything, not even breaking a promise.
But anyway, this is great. Sorry I ranted. Keep writing...you're REALLY good at it.
| Jaricchi chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
This is awesome. :O Thank you for writing and sharing. :D
| LaDyPeRcAbEtHiSQueenb chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
oh my holy gods u lov to kill me inside oh my holy gods!
| ObsessedwReading chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
Great job on this.
| randomosity4arty chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
Oh, nice. I like how they were the characters only different people...if that makes sense.
| Kisses Reflect chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
Oh My Gods! That was terribly heart rendering! Loved it! Especially as it ended. Peter, Olivia, Cara and Annie Bell (I'm guessing). Loved it.
| FanFicCriTicTheThird chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
oh my gosh this was so creepy and brain fumbling.
Me and reincarnations Do Not Mix Well
It makes my brain hurt and become annoyed and frustrated
frustrated brain is sad brain
| expa chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
W O W
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
Agghh this is soo cute! I can totally imagine this :)
| scarletfireblaze chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
House of Hades made this ten times more painful...
*goes off to cry in a corner*
Very nicely written, anyways! I would never have thought of the whole rebirth thing, but it's a good idea! Wouldn't Bianca be older, though, since she was reborn before Percy?
Apart from that minor detail (who knows, maybe it's wrong. Like I would know how the Underworld works XD) it's really incredible! Please keep writing!
| love-heart-heart chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
*cries because I was expecting something angsty but instead this is so bittersweet and I've been reading nothing but angst lately so this is good*
| PheonixFire316 chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
Oh my god I'm crying so hard right now... Great job
| RascalJoy chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
Wow. Honestly, I never thought I would be able to picture Percy as anyone but himself. But you actually made it believable for him to try for rebirth. We all know Bianca did, so why not the others?
Keep up the GREAT work!
| DarkHorseBlueSky chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
I LOVE NICO! You do him so awesomely and you have to do more of him! ,
| meriland25 chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
Wonderful! I love the idea, it is amazing! Have a nice day,and thank you for this story, it really is great!