|Reviews for The Last|
| Cue Song chapter 24 . 3h ago
C-C-C-C-Changes! Time has changed! You'll never be who you want or stuff...
Time may change me! But I can't change time...
Your story is fab. Make Batman immortal like Cyborg Superman or Vandal Savage or Cloning like Lex or stuff with his own clan. Fabulous!
Also, why didn't they just attack Apokalips instead of waiting for Apokalips to attack them? Me no proud of lackis common sensus.
Common Sense, a rare but dangerous power indeed.
| The1dkman chapter 24 . 3h ago
This chapter was amazing. Loved that it was all abt Clark, Diana and their kids. The chapter had everything. Love, tenderness and grieve. Great rollercoaster ride. Update soon.
| LoLana chapter 24 . 3h ago
This is such a good story! I know its going to end at some point, but i really hope its not too soon! The maturity level is very welcome, no random fluff that doesnt help the story along, and no one calling each other babe every 5 seconds. The varying POVs and inclusion of different events throughout the DC timeline is so well done, I'm kinda wishing this were a graphic novel or comic series haha. Please keep this going, one of if not the best Justice League/SMWW fic on this site!
| Guest chapter 24 . 5h ago
This is such an awesome fic...can't wait for more!
| Star Dust of Ancient Novae chapter 24 . 10h ago
Holy mother of fudge. Okay then. I now have no idea how this is going to continue.
Good job on portraying the differences between parents and children.
| Love ur story chapter 21 . 10h ago
Galactus vs Darkseid. Actually it's already been done. Look it up, although it's not considered canon for some reason.
Darkseid didn't stand a chance. Galactus simply has more raw power, being sibling to Death and Eternity. But you already knew that didn't you?!
Also, there's Jean Grey. The Phoenix Force. Yeah...
PS: Love ur story! Horacion Seioffs!
| Sano Hibiki chapter 24 . 12h ago
I’m awe-struck speechless from shire awesomeness of this chapter. Poor little Lara… And to think that this practically only half of 1000 –years of war.
| Rhett1980 chapter 24 . 13h ago
How has Superman's immunity to magic and kryptonite improved since he's been on Asgard? Obviously he's far more powerful now than he was when he left Earth.
| phyrephly chapter 24 . 13h ago
...another stand-alone masterpiece. I think some of the earlier comments were spot-on; this would make an awesome comic on its own. Makes me wonder what'll happen when (if?) Diana and Clark return home where will Gabriel and Lyta go? - home is where the heart is. Superb story-telling.
| crossoverftw chapter 24 . 13h ago
so they have 500 years left
| 666Peaches101 chapter 24 . 13h ago
Wow. This chapter left me weary. I want the war to end now! LOL You wrote well about the children not grieving the same way as their parents. Since they grew up in Asgard, they eventually learned the customs and embrace the culture to they adapted. I will wait patiently for the next chapter since you left me wondering. X-D Well I see you in next chapter :) Take care.
| Guest chapter 24 . 16h ago
Great writing as always, i just have 2 minor issues. I feel like there was a missed opportunity with exploring their first pregnancy and the various fluff that goes along with it. Also idk but i dont see them fighting a 500 year war without having tried some other tactical option besides "beating them back and waiting till they regain strength to attack us again". I feel like they would have attempted to attack Darkseid at home to end it once a for all a while ago
| Guest chapter 24 . 17h ago
The quality and speed of these chapter is simply breathtaking. Though, the children's introduction was brief, I loved how you fleshed them out via the story, not in some pointless backstory. I also love how you give context clues to the second time jump within the story. It's as if we are expected to experience the time as it is for superman and wonder woman, in the context of hundreds of years of life, fifty years is but six months. I can scarcely wait for the next chapter, as batman becomes increasingly irrelevant to the story as he begins to age.
| jwill21 chapter 24 . 18h ago
Maaaaan I really HATE Darkseid
| reader10215 chapter 24 . 18h ago
When they return to their home universe will it be the same time then?