|Reviews for The Last|
| HELLACRE13 chapter 30 . 4/20/2014
That was a great and epic journey. Really well done. It had real weight and majesty in the way you ended it.
| rolalinii chapter 30 . 4/20/2014
Wow great story is all I can pretty much say! Loved it.
| McCabeRz chapter 30 . 4/20/2014
It's a shame that this is the last chapter, I've deeply enjoyed this and always anticipated a new chapter after finishing the newly updated one.
Thanks for writing this, been one of the best I've read.
| jwill21 chapter 30 . 4/20/2014
Wow this was one heck of a story i truly enjoyed and absolutely loved reading this fic. This would be a TRUE Man of Steel sequel and DC should honestly make this a comic whether canon or elseworld. I hope one day we will find out what truly happened to Superman and Wonder Woman.
| Berserkerofhell chapter 30 . 4/20/2014
What a wonderful story, truly. I hope that this is not the last story you write of these two! :)
| Nightwing 509 chapter 30 . 4/20/2014
I liked the way you ended the story with an air of mystery. I hope you write a sequel.
| joronscott chapter 30 . 4/20/2014
This has been an amazing story. The last paragraphs confused the hell out of me though.
| ManSinha chapter 29 . 4/18/2014
This was an interesting chapter. Until I read the A/N I was almost sure that Diana / Clark would find a way to restore the timeline and prevent themselves as never having returned. This would also dovetail with the defeat of Darkseid's machinations. However your comment about this being the last of the Bat in this story line pretty much seals the deal.
Like the others have said - this is very well written and paced. I am interested to see how the New God comes to grief in the final paragraphs or maybe you are keeping that plot line in reserve for a sequel.
Lovely writing - happy to proof read anytime should you need one
| Sano Hibiki chapter 29 . 4/16/2014
I am pleased to see that Clark got his final goodbye with Bruce and Kara (too bad that Diana wasn’t so lucky with her relatives). Curious what Lex would be up to in the future...
Emotionally strong and touching chapter, my respect to you.
| Guest chapter 29 . 4/15/2014
I love this fic it is the best in the whole justice league section. I think it would be cool if you made Kal bring back the Kryptonians via the codex within his cells i always wanted to read a well written fic where he does so but i cannot find any. Great story i hope the next chapter isnt...The Last
| 666Peaches101 chapter 29 . 4/14/2014
Man this chapter reminds of one song in Spanish, "La Camino de la Vida." The Road of Life or the Way of Life. At least they say goodbye to each other. Damn, its sad to say the story is almost over :((
| crossoverftw chapter 29 . 4/14/2014
wow what a chapter. thought i missed a chapter when kal ans daina went back in time.
| Opaque-Cavalier chapter 29 . 4/14/2014
First off, your conclusion of Batman's story is both fitting and incredible. Plus a great throw away line about symbols and hypocrisoy.
Both happy and sad to see the story ending. But o will be binge reading it in its entirety as soon as you're finished.
| Guest chapter 29 . 4/14/2014
That was awesome...I can't wait for more!
| phyrephly chapter 29 . 4/14/2014
*sniff, sniff* ;'}. I think this has bragging rights to the most poignant chapter (Clark returning from Apokolips and telling Diana of what he endured there, and the death to Lara comes close, but for sheer hero-factor, this one wins. Last line's a killer...Just one more to go, eh? Sequel? Vale Artemis; Loved Selina's "stiffness" around Kal, dunno, just seemed ... right. Gotta feel for Kara. I think Bruce would make a heck of a POTUS too. Too bad this is fictional... Five gold stars!