|Reviews for The Second Son of God|
| Fanboi chapter 10 . 8/9/2016
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/1/2016
The title of the story alluded to a heaven-based Naruto, and it's only halfway through the story that any mention of the title is found. Instead of what I was searching for, I got another, "Character named Naruto that I'll slap in a story," overdone, "Let the MC have powers yet still die to loser Fallen," story where, "MC falls instantly in love with the person who says they're the new master," as well as being perfectly fine with their life plans being derailed because a girl doesn't want to be in a political marriage." It might be my loathing for Rias Gremory leaking through, but I cannot stand stories that have the Super Duper MC die and instantly are submissive or are completely submissive after one scene. Not to mention I t's bad writing to have a 180 degree flip in emotions that quickly with no explanation.
Nevertheless, you used overdone plot after overdone scene after overdone relations, with an OC you slapped a name onto to justify getting it into two story categories. Next time don't put it in crossover if you don't have a crossover but just a cameo. It's seditious and it undermines the stories that actually have crossover materiel in them, not just OC with names.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2016
I liked the concept of the story with mc having that analysis power, and a goal to become a doctor but everything is just a random gobbled mess. You could have just made an oc and this would make it more interesting, but you chose the retarded Naruto insert for no apparent reason. All the other characters you inserted could have been any other person and it wouldn't matter.
| bloodbrother 18 chapter 10 . 6/20/2016
Wow love hope you continu this story.
| Reclusive Dork chapter 10 . 5/31/2016
Sooooo... is this story dead?
| xXxnarusasuxXx chapter 10 . 5/23/2016
| Tora1802 chapter 7 . 5/22/2016
One of the most trashlike Storys i ever read, i thought it could be a really good Story, but no just like Trash ! why ? because Rias Gremory is a fucking whore and naruto and Rias ? Pls then RiasxRiser is more better ! And when the title is the second son of GOD, then this Son should be an angel and not a FUCKING Devil, where is the logic ?
| Dragoncyber22 chapter 10 . 5/5/2016
continues the story
| Mandalore Requiem chapter 10 . 4/29/2016
Well damn…. Talk about memorable exits.
| Mandalore Requiem chapter 7 . 4/29/2016
Ah! The cuteness I may just O.D. on it.
| Raz. The Writer chapter 10 . 4/28/2016
damn...They became rabbits. Actually, when you find of it a little more, Naruto just made extremely important diplomatic move. Rias is probably one of the strongest devil of her generation, so it would be logical to think she should achieve the title of one of the great four. Akeno could achieve the same but for fallens and of course, for the end, last but less important Gabriel with her 12 wings...Naruto you sick basted, you. By the way, dunno why but I just damn wait to see Naruto braking that evil piece and spreading his 12 (or more) angel wings. The Lucifer's sister married seraphim. Just think about all this chaos. I hope it wouldn't take you long to update of things may get...unpredictable
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/25/2016
i like ur writing but change the main characters name. Naruto has a lack of respect for authority and if u look at his mentality in the anime he wouldnt act like ria's lapdog in any universe. Your
| NARUMOKA chapter 10 . 4/20/2016
Finish this fanfic
| perd chapter 10 . 4/19/2016
only problem about your stories is that u dont even finish them even if they are really good and have potential.
| Shadowdragondanny chapter 10 . 4/18/2016
Hope 2 read more