|Reviews for Breathe Me In, Touch Me, Bind My Soul|
| KaiBlueOtaku chapter 1 . 14h ago
Oh, Chocolate dear... You never disappoint, do you? For not having started out as very much of a Yaoi fan, you're doing a fine job of converting me, lol. Even the darkness, the non-con themes... I'd wager you could transcribe the New York Phone Directory, and I'd be hot and bothered after reading your version. This was delicious, as always. I'm afraid to read too much more, like an addict with a limited amount left in their stash, you know? I don't want to run out of your stories too soon... It's
so strange to me too, because my own work is
generally very tender and loving, and you have
such thick, dark themes, but there's some
quality in your writing that calls out to me...
| The X Duchess chapter 4 . 3/8
You deserve a thousand rewards for this master piece that is still in progress. I find it incredibly beautiful and shows the most in depth relationship between Ichigo and his inner self. I like how you show the mental and sensual feelings of the orange-haired teen. You didn't keep it simple with saying he was just 'upset' or 'angry', and instead you went above and beyond in writing this and I thoroughly read this twice and made two observations while doing so.
During my first read, I just went along for the ride in this continuing journey and enjoyed the interactions and drama that happened during each chapter. I loved it when Ichigo had to get help from Urahara since it showed the strain and exhaustion that the Substitute had been dealing with. (I'm also in love with the humor during that situation; so excuse me while I chuckle at the sly Urahara's actions portrayed so perfectly).
The second read was truly a trip for me this time because I began to understand everything that Ichigo was going through and even had a few tears when Juha Bach made the poor boy's world flip multiple times. You made me enter a whole new universe and as if I was watching a Five-Star movie that was to remembered for the ages.
So, please update when you have the time, dear?
| p3paula chapter 1 . 2/26
it's now a rarity for me to review per chapter (especially when laziness hits me)
but that intro was just too poetic..
and damn *holds hand against nose to stop the bleeding* too hot.
reading onto the next chapter
| DeeaE chapter 4 . 2/16
it's so awesome
i love your writing skills
| ElectraX12 chapter 4 . 2/12
the lemon was simply mind-blowing! this has to be the best chapter yet. I really like the way you wtite shiro's and ichigo's interactions. it really is a very nice characterization. I can't wait to see the scene between shiro and isshin. update as soon as you can and keep up the good work ;)
| SoulMore chapter 4 . 2/10
| raindropdew chapter 4 . 2/10
Thank you! I was excited to read the chapter when I saw this had updated! I love a possessive zangetsu. And the lemon sean wonderful as always. The emotions are really intense between those two. Ohh and speaking ju ha bach I can remember how u spell that lol I read you story with him and ichi I loved it! Wish there where more of those. Back on topic lol thank you for the chapter I enjoyed it and I'm excited to see the talk between isshin and zan! (:
| Peteeter chapter 4 . 2/10
Love it. Absolutely amazing.
| Litte Yagami Osanowa chapter 4 . 2/10
TwT) Its a great story and I LOVED every piece of it... And when i know this story updating i'm so happy! Cant wait for more of this and you other story :)
| S chapter 3 . 1/17
I love this story so much, it has such a interesting plot line. You are one of my favorite authors on here.
| SoulMore chapter 3 . 12/12/2013
| raindropdew chapter 3 . 11/29/2013
Ohh ichi your having all sorts of things going on. I love the story so far and I'm excited for the next chapter. Hopefully isshin will help ichi sort things out.
| LokiHatake chapter 3 . 11/14/2013
Quincy? Is his dad even his real dad?
| Zer0Espada chapter 3 . 11/11/2013
Great chapter! I really like this story! :D :)
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/11/2013
the way you ended this chapter... ugh i really want to read more looking forward to the next chapter