|Reviews for Games|
| DragonBookAddict chapter 1 . 2/15
I find myself enjoying many of your stories more than I expect to, for reasons I don't expect before I begin. 'Games' is a perfect example of one such story, as the part that drew me in the most wasn't the sexual contents, but how you wrote each character and their interactions with each other. My only real issue is your use of the word 'paedophile' when 'child molester' is the appropriate word here. The word 'paedophile' is used in the ENTIRELY wrong context, but that's a result of society assigning the wrong definitions to words when it comes to our vernacular rather than any fault of yours.
You see, despite what most people believe, 'paedophile' and 'child molester' are NOT synonyms, and actually mean different things. A 'child molester' is exactly what people think; someone who performs sexual acts with children. A 'paedophile', however, is NOT what people think; yes, they are sexually attracted to children, HOWEVER, they NEVER actually do anything sexual with children. They will think about it, fantasize about it, even masturbate about it, but they will NEVER actually do anything sexual with children.
I despise child molesters with every molecule of my being, but I actually admire paedophiles. Unlike some people, paedophiles don't give in to their base desires, following their morals and even helping to keep children safe because they don't want to see them hurt. They will refuse to be left alone with a child to avoid temptation, and can recognize a child molester better than anyone because they know the feeling of that temptation, but they're strong enough to resist it. People can learn a lot about self-control from paedophiles.
| RoastPigeon chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
Oh my god. Perfection.
| Seriyuu chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
uwahh...cute and hot! please write more for these two!
| MemoriesOfVoxei chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
OMG that was simply AMAZING! I haven't read your two other fma fics yet, but I plann on doing just that very soon x3 Have you ever thought of doing a sequel to this one-shot? You know, like letting your addict readers (ME!) know of Ed's second chance with Roy? If you do, please let me know, cause I'm definitely going to cheer for you and urge you to write it fast. Because, you know, I REALLY want to read about this possible sequel x3
Thanks for sharing such a great fic with us,
| Melmel Phase chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
This was great! Absolutely perfect! I love your writing style :D Of corse the story almost killed me from how much I loved it :3 Super job hun
| ThousandxSunny chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
O_O O_O O_O wow O_O that was one seriously well written and smexy lemon O_O I'd have to say it goes into the top 5 best RoyEd lemon for me O_O gooood job! :DDD
| IzayaOriharaTheSexyInfoBroker chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
*dies from blood loss* Holy crap, this was nosebleed inducing! Amazing! I really want a sequel... Lol
| Eiri and Kurama lover07 chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
that was awesome, i cant believe you only had two reviews. where's all the other yoai lovers at? aw well. normally im lazy and dont review but your fic was entirely too hot not to. keep up the writing. oh i enjoyed the plot as well.
| kitty chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
that was f***ing hot
| smiles chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
All i can say is WoW. *shivers*