|Reviews for The Boy Who Loved The Sea|
| xTinyGhoulx chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
That. Was. AWESOME!
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
This was very nice to read from start to finish. :)
| snk-sunshine chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
This was perfect. Just. Perfect!
I loved every single word of this fic -w-
| Chessie626 chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
Love it so much.
| Lil'MissEya chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
YOUR WORDING IS SO FU CKING FABULOUS OMG I LOVE IT AND THANK YOU FOR ACTUALLY WRITING A RINHARU AND NOW A MAKOHARURIN TRIANGLE FDKDGALFHDLAVSL I SEE THOSE EVERYWHERE
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
Since you seem very confident and prideful about this story, I will not criticize it too harshly. Indeed, the details were very vivid, easily allowing a picture to come to mind. However, throughout the whole story, I never really felt any... emotion. I didn't feel excited when Haru and Rin shared their kiss, frightened when Haru nearly drowned in the sea, or saddened when Haru lost his grandma. This is the only major flaw in your story. There is no spark that made me feel as though I was within the story, witnessing the situations myself.
Nonetheless though, literature wise, it will brilliant. Descriptive writing, steady pace, and no grammar or spelling mistakes. Wonderful job.