Reviews for Liv's Birthday Bonanza - Prompt 4
twirob chapter 1 . 3/1/2016
that was so cool but it finished too early thanks for sharing ;D
CindyWindy1 chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
Nicely done! It's amazing how something so short can grab your attention...and tug at your heart. Glad you ended on a happy note.
newmommyak chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
I like it. It's what she should have done.
Fleur50 chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
moosals chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
Phew, they got there in the end! Great switch around, thanks :)
irelandk chapter 1 . 2/7/2014
k1942 chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
Well, well, how impetuous of you Edward! It damn near takes a sledgehammer to get this boy's attention, doesn't it? At least he came to get her, he didn't let her wither away!
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
what is it with you , you start a great story and then end it finish your story please give them the life they need PLEASE your such a great writer finish it
hotmama4jd chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
Awesome. I do wish he had been making love to her simultaneously as he bit her. ;P
butzi chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
Loved it! What a great birthday gift.
Rita01tx chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
You know, I don't see why it couldn't just as well have gone that way in the first place LOL!
Lov.Twii chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
So perfect! Amazing job :)
misslibby chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
Hell, I like your version better.
heatherEcoast chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
YAY! I always said in New Moon when he left her, she should've called his bluff and slit her wrists right there. Force his hand, I would've!
suzy 2010 chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
Seems Bella leaving made Edward have a change of heart.
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